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Band 6+: The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image includes a line graph and a table. The graph shows monthly rainfall (cm) from January to December for three towns: Kainaliu, Opiohale, and Holualoa. Kainaliu's rainfall peaks at 18 cm in March and is lowest at 4 cm in June. Opiohale's highest is 16 cm in March and lowest at 6 cm in May. Holualoa's peak is 14 cm in April and dips to 8 cm in May. The table shows average annual rainfall (1971-2000) in the towns: Kainaliu 138.38, Opiohale 97.53, Holualoa 110.48.

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The graph illustrates the average monthly rainfalls for three towns, namely Kainaliu, Opihihale and Holualoa; situated in Kona district of Hawaii. Additionally a table is also given when tabulates the average annual rainfalls from the year 1971 to 2000.

Overall, the Kainaliu town had the highest average rainfall in the month of September while Holualoa had the lowest in the December month. Subsequently, the Kainaliu recorded had the highest average annual showers while that of Opihihale had been the lowest.

The precipitation in Kainaliu reached 17 cm in September, which was the peak but had a massive decline of 10 cm by November. Whereas the Opihihale mostly had been consistent with minor changes, however, the area had its peak in September with approximately 10.5 cm rainfall. On the other hand, the wet weather in Holualoa had kept incling and declining every month.

In the time period of 30 years, the Opihihale is observed to have an average yearly rainfall of 97.53 cm, while that of Kainaliu and Holualoa was 138.38 and 110.48 respectively.

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kainaliu: 5

opihihale: 4

rainfall: 3

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holualoa: 3

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The report adequately covers the main features of the graph and table, providing a reasonable summary of the rainfall data for the three towns. The overall trends and specific data points are mentioned, and comparisons are made. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions that could be improved. For example, the report states that Kainaliu had the highest average rainfall in September, which is not entirely accurate based on the graph provided. Also, the report could benefit from a more structured approach, focusing on key trends and significant differences between the towns. To improve, ensure accuracy in data reporting and focus on the most prominent features and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overall statements are present, but the transitions between paragraphs and sentences are not always smooth. For instance, the shift from monthly to annual rainfall could be clearer. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and improve the overall readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Words like 'precipitation' and 'showers' are relevant, but the report could benefit from a wider range of synonyms and more specific language to describe the rainfall patterns. For example, instead of 'massive decline,' consider using more descriptive terms like 'significant decrease' or 'sharp drop.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Issues such as incorrect verb tenses ('Kainaliu town had the highest average rainfall in the month of September'), subject-verb agreement ('Kainaliu recorded had the highest average annual showers'), and article usage ('the December month') are present. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the report's credibility. Focus on proofreading carefully to identify and correct these mistakes.

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