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Band 6+: The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing data between 2010 and 2013 for six countries: China (2010: 9,000,000 | 2013: 15,000,000), India (2010: 10,570,000 | 2013: 18,000,000), Philippines (2010: 75,040,000 | 2013: 72,000,000), Vietnam (2010: 5,590,000 | 2013: 5,321,168), Korea (2010: 5,270,000 | 2013: 1,319,100), Japan (2010: 400,000 | 2013: 509,000).

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The bar chart illustrates the number of Catholic people settling in in 6 different Asian countries in 2010 and 2013.

Overall, amount of residents in Philippines was the highest in both years. While population of Catholics decreased in countries like Vietnam, Korea, and Philippines, it rose in remaining three countries.

Number of Catholics in Vietnam generally remained the same but experienced slight decrease in about 269 000 people in the given period; whereas Korea with almost the same figures in 2010 (5,27 million) underwent major decline and ended up being almost 5 times less (1,319 million) in 2013.

Both India and China showed considerable increase in numbers, where it rose from 10,57 million to 19 million in former and from 9 million to 15 million in latter countries. Japan, with its lowest figures amongst all countries also showed slight increase in 109 thousand, from 400 000 in 2010 to 509 000 in 2013.

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The report adequately covers the main features of the bar chart, providing a general overview and some specific data points. The overall trends are identified, and comparisons are made between countries. To improve, ensure that all significant data points are mentioned and that the magnitude of changes is consistently represented accurately. For instance, double-check the numbers to avoid minor inaccuracies.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure. The information is presented logically, and the main trends are identified. However, there are some areas where cohesion could be improved. For example, transitions between paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of information. Also, ensure that each sentence within a paragraph is clearly linked to the main idea of that paragraph.

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The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, appropriate for the task. There is room to enhance the sophistication of word choice to achieve a higher band score. Consider using synonyms and more precise language to describe the data. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'increase' or 'decrease,' explore alternative expressions like 'growth,' 'expansion,' 'decline,' or 'reduction.'

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The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are some grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the writing. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate use of articles and prepositions. Review the report carefully to identify and correct these errors. Also, ensure that punctuation is used correctly to enhance clarity.

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