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Band 4+: The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows line graphs comparing USA labor force employment from 1930 to 2010 in five sectors: Industrial, Technical, Sales and Office, Other Services, and Farming, Fishing and Forestry. Industrial employment decreased from 70% to below 20%, Technical increased from below 20% to above 40%, Sales and Office increased from 10% to above 25%, Other Services increased from below 10% to above 25%, and Farming, Fishing and Forestry decreased from above 40% to below 5%.

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The linegraph illustares information of the employment system in the USA between 1930 and 2010.

Beetween 1940 and 1970, industrial pottern had a very small percentage. However, from 1970 to 2010, this indicator increased considerably and it was 38 percent. In 1930, soles and office jobs accouned for 10 percent. Until 2010, this figure increased and decreased between 0 and 20 %, finally reached 20 % in 2010. In 1930, farming, fishing and foresting were the most high percentage, about 8 %. However, in 2010 this figure was the smallest percentage.

Technical activities were 1 or 2 percent between 1930 and 1940. by the 1960s, it began to rise. And it reached 36 % in 2010. As for other services, they also were aroud 20 %, between these years.

In conclusion, al of them services increased better than 1930, and they achieved good percentage. But, agriculture, fisheries and forestry declined in 2010 compared to 1930.

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The report provides a general overview of the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010, highlighting the main features of the data. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report that slightly affect the overall task response score.

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4.5

The report is somewhat coherent and cohesive, with some attempt at organizing the information into paragraphs. However, there are issues with clarity and logical progression of ideas, affecting the overall coherence and cohesion score.

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3.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and repetitions present in the report. More precise and varied word choices could enhance the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors throughout the report. Improvements in grammar accuracy and sentence structures are needed to achieve a higher score in this criterion.

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