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Band 4+: The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph depicting vehicle registration proportions for trucks, taxis, and buses in the US for 1970-2010. In 1970, trucks held 40%, taxis 40%, and buses 20%. By 1980, trucks decreased to 30%, taxis peaked at 45%, and buses rose to 25%. In 1990, trucks further decreased to 25%, taxis dropped to 35%, and buses maintained at 30%. By 2000, trucks were at 30%, taxis at 35%, and buses back to 25%. In 2010, trucks rose to 40%, taxis declined to 30%, and buses fell to 10%.

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The bar chart below show proportion the share of vehicle registrations of the three types of commercial vehicles in the US from 1970 to 2010

Overall, both three type of vehicles have tended to decline in percentage of registration, instead of taxi from 1970 to 2010. In addition, bus registration accounted for lowest proportion in the same period time.

From 1970 to 2010, truck and bus registration fluctuated with nearly 1%. In 1970, the number of truck are registed accounting for the highest percentage among three vehicle. In contrast, bus is the least popular in that time, as well as in all period. The percentage of truck decreased sharply by nearly 18% (from about 48% to 30%) from 1970 to 1980, standing at the second of common types vehicles, and then slightly climb to 45%. The bus is only significantly rise by 10% in ten year from 1970 and then fall gradually to 4% at 2010.

The percentage of taxi registration witnessed the strong fluctuation from the given period. In ten years after 1970, this proportion peak at 36% before decrease significantly at 15% in 2000. From 2000, the percentage of taxi registration continues to fluctuate when increase by 20% to 35% and stand the second place in three vehicles.

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registration: 5

three: 4

vehicles: 4

proportion: 3

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truck: 3

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