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Band 8+: The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a line graph detailing percentages for the years 1976, 1981, 1986, 1991, 1996, 2001, 2006, and 2011 across four categories labeled Total, UK, Other, and Asia; Total begins at 25% in 1976, rises gradually to peak at approximately 32% in 2011; UK starts at 22% in 1976, follows a declining trend to around 10% in 2001, then slightly increases to 12% in 2011; Other starts at 10% in 1976, remains relatively stable until 1991, then starts increasing to reach about 15% in 2011; Asia starts at 2% in 1976, shows a steady increase to 10% by 1991, stabilizes around 10-12% till 2006, then rises slightly to approximately 15% in 2011.

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The line graph illustrates the percentages of Australians born in the UK, Asia and other parts of the world as well as the total proportion, between 1976 and 2011.

Overall, the percentage of Australians born in Asia increased substantially over the given time, whereas the figure for the UK decreased. Additionally, the figure for the other countries fluctuated before ending higher than its initial level. The overall proportion fell initially and then rose considerably.

The percentage of Australians born in Asia stood at around 3% in 1976 and then rose considerably to 15% by 2011, overtaking the UK’s share. By contrast, the proportion of people born in the UK declined steadily from approximately 15% to 5% over the same period. As for other parts of the world, the percentage of Australians born in other parts of the world began at around 10% and then fell to around 8% in 1986 before rising again to roughly 14% in 2011.

Finally, the overall share stood at almost 30% at the beginning, after which it dropped to 23% in 1986 and remained stable until 1991. It subsequently increased considerably to around 33% by the end of the period.

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australians: 4

other: 4

around: 4

parts: 3

world: 3

proportion: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main trends and making relevant comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with a logical progression from an overview to specific details. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., initial values for UK and total, and the description of the total trend). To improve, ensure that all figures are accurately reported and that the overview fully reflects the main trends, including the initial rise in the total percentage. Additionally, avoid minor repetition in phrasing (e.g., 'other parts of the world' used twice in one sentence).

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective, and the progression of ideas is logical. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the repetition of 'the percentage of Australians born in other parts of the world' which could be streamlined. Additionally, the final paragraph could be more smoothly linked to the previous ones. Overall, the message is easy to follow, and paragraphing is managed well.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, with words like 'illustrates,' 'substantially,' 'fluctuated,' 'overtaking,' and 'steadily.' There is some repetition of phrases (e.g., 'the percentage of Australians born in'), which could be varied for a more sophisticated lexical control. The use of synonyms and paraphrasing is adequate, but there is room for more natural and precise word choices. Overall, the vocabulary is accurate and appropriate, though not fully flexible.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. Grammar and punctuation are largely accurate, with no significant errors. There are a few minor issues, such as the phrase 'the figure for the other countries fluctuated before ending higher than its initial level' which could be more concise, but these do not detract from clarity. The range of structures is good, but there is some repetition in sentence patterns. Overall, the grammar is controlled and accurate.

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