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Band 5+: The graph below shows Non Governmental Organization revenue by source and season.

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The image presents a bar graph comparing NGO revenue by source (Sales Proceeds, Private Donations, Corporate Sponsors) and by season (Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter) for the year 2015; Spring: Sales Proceeds 9 million, Private Donations 3 million, Corporate Sponsors 1 million; Summer: Sales Proceeds 1 million, Private Donations 4 million, Corporate Sponsors 2 million; Fall: Sales Proceeds 2 million, Private Donations 6 million, Corporate Sponsors 8 million; Winter: Sales Proceeds 3 million, Private Donations 2 million, Corporate Sponsors 7 million.
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The graph illustrates NGO (non-governmental organization) revenue by source and season in 2015.Overall,there are noticeable seasonal variations in revenue.

In Spring, sales proceeds reached 9 million in revenue,private donations amounted to 4 million, corporate sponsors amounted 2 million in revenue. Three month later, sales proceeds decreased to 3 million, private donations increased to 5 million, meanwhile corporate sponsors remained unchanged at 2 million.In fall, sales proceeds decreased to 2 million, private donations as before increased to 6 million, while corporate sponsors increased to 8 million,making them the highest sourse of revenue in autumn.In last season,sales increased to 3 million, meanwhile private donations and corporate sponsors both amounted 7 million.

In summary, from whole seasons the highest point had a sales proceeds in spring, meanwhile in the lowest point was corporate sponsors in summer and spring, and also sales proceeds.Private donations was in the middle point in spring,summer and autumn,after all the private donation trasformation to rival for corporate sponsors in graph for the lead.

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
million: 8
corporate: 6
sponsors: 6
sales: 5
donations: 5
proceeds: 4
private: 4
increased: 4
revenue: 3
spring: 3
amounted: 3
meanwhile: 3
point: 3
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Task Response

6
The report identifies some key features of the graph but includes inaccuracies in the data. The structure is somewhat clear, but the language could be more precise and sophisticated. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. Also, ensure that the overview provides a clear summary of the main trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The flow of information is difficult to follow due to the lack of cohesive devices and logical connections between sentences and paragraphs. The paragraphing is not well-managed, and the overall structure could be improved to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of varied and sophisticated language. The report relies on simple words and phrases, which restricts the depth and complexity of the description. Expanding the range of vocabulary would improve the overall quality of the report. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the writing. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction is essential for a higher score.

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