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Band 4+: The graph below shows the annual number of rides taken on two forms of public transportation in the city of Williamsville.

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The image displays a bar graph showing the "Annual Ridership, Williamsville: 2011-2015." The x-axis is labeled "Year" with years 2011 to 2015 and the y-axis is labeled "Rides" with a range from 100,000,000 to 800,000,000 in increments of 100,000,000. There are 2 bars per year, one for "Bus" and one for "Subway," in order of left to right. The bus ridership increased from approximately 475,000,000 rides in 2011 to approximately 700,000,000 in 2015, with a slight dip in 2014. The subway ridership remained relatively consistent, ranging from approximately 250,000,000 to 275,000,000 rides each year.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of journeys made by buses and subway in Williamsville throughout the five-year period. It is evident that the subway ridership experienced a stable increase while the bus ridership showed some fluctuations during the period.

In 2011 400 000 000 rides by bus were recorded, compared to 600 000 000 subway journeys. Bus usage rose slightly in 2012 before falling in 2013. It then increased again in 2014 and ended the period at around 420 million rides in 2015.

By contrast, subway ridership grew consistently from 600 million rides in 2011 to about 750 million in 2015. The most significant growth was in 2015.

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subway: 4

ridership: 3

rides: 3

million: 3

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the ridership numbers for both bus and subway in 2011 are incorrect. Also, the description of the bus ridership fluctuations is not entirely accurate. To improve, ensure that the data cited is accurate and that all key trends are noted. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report has some issues with coherence and cohesion. The overview is present but could be more precise. The progression of ideas within paragraphs is not always smooth, and the connection between sentences could be strengthened. Paragraphing is adequate but could be improved to better group related information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Some phrases are a bit basic. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and quantities more accurately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structures are relatively simple, and there are inaccuracies in the use of tenses and numbers. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy throughout the report.

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Band 4+: The graph below shows the annual number of rides taken on two forms of public transportation in the city of Williamsville.

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