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Band 5+: The graph below shows the average length of stay last year (in days) for serious injuries for different age groups in private and public hospitals in Queensland in Australia

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The image shows a line graph titled "Last Year's Average Length of Stay at Private and Public Hospitals for Serious Injuries – Queensland, Australia" with two lines representing 'PUBLIC' and 'PRIVATE' hospitals. The X-axis lists age groups: 00-05, 06-10, 11-15, 20-25, 30-35, 40-45, 50-55, 60-65, 70-74, 75-80, 85+; with corresponding years below each group: 04, 09, 14, 19, 24, 29, 34, 39, 44, 49, 54, 59, 64, 69, 74, 79, 84. The Y-axis measures the average length of stay (days), ranging from 0 to 60 in increments of 10. For Public hospitals, the data points for age groups are as follows: 00-05: 35 days, 06-10: 25, 11-15: 25, 20-25: 15, 30-35: 35, 40-45: 52, 50-55: 40, 60-65: 42, 70-74: 20, 75-80: 18, 85+: 18. For Private hospitals, the data points are: 00-05: 20 days, 06-10: 16, 11-15: 20, 20-25: 14, 30-35: 15, 40-45: 20, 50-55: 20, 60-65: 25, 70-74: 18, 75-80: 14, 85+: 14. There are no data points for the 16-19 and 26-29 age groups.

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This graph illustrates the annual average of period patients of various age groups had stayed in both private and public hospitals last year in Queensland, Australia.

Overall, there’s a conpicious upward pattern for young adults to middle aged groups staying longer in both sort of medical institutions in comparison with other age groups. Though generally, public hospitals remain higher than private hospitals regarding the average length of stay of patients across all ages.

For public hospitals, newborns to pre-teens spent the least amount of days from 1 to 20 and the average period of stay gradually accelerates from there on. Adolescents stayed for an average of 4 weeks to nearly 1.5 months, wheres people of mid 20’s made a record for remaining the longest period of marking almost 2 months long stay. Followed closely by patients in mid 40’s. The pattern declines from there on to people of old age (85+) staying for 2 weeks.

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The graph below shows the average length of stay last year (in days) for serious injuries for different age groups in private and public hospitals in Queensland in Australia

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