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Band 5+: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph indicating average monthly percentage changes in prices for copper, nickel, and zinc in 2014. Copper: Jan -1%, Feb 1%, Mar 1.5%, Apr 1%, May 0.5%, Jun -2%, Jul -1.5%, Aug 0.5%, Sep 0.5%, Oct -0.5%, Nov 0%, Dec 0.5%. Nickel: Jan 5%, Feb 3%, Mar 3.5%, Apr 3%, May 2%, Jun 0%, Jul -1%, Aug -1%, Sep 0.5%, Oct 0.5%, Nov 1%, Dec 1.5%. Zinc: Jan 6.5%, Feb 4%, Mar 4.5%, Apr 4.5%, May 3.5%, Jun -3.5%, Jul -4%, Aug -1.5%, Sep 0.5%, Oct 0.5%, Nov 1%, Dec 1.5%. Y-axis denotes % change in price; X-axis lists months J-D.

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The line graph illustrates the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that the the price of Zinc slightly increased throughout the year, while the prices of Copper and Nickel dramatically decreased.

In detail, in January the price of Copper was 2%, then it steadily declined to 0.50% in March. After that, from March to June the price remained unchanged at 0.50%. However, in July it slighty rose to 1%. In contrast, in July the price of Cooper gradually rose to 1%, and then remained stable at 1% from July to August. Lastly, then reached to 1.50% in December. The price of Nickel was 6% in January, then it dramatically dropped to 1% in March. Similarly, in July it further decreased to -3% June. However, in July reached to -1%, after that remained stable at -1% from July to Septamber. Lastly, in December it significantly rose to 1%. Finally, the price of Zinc was 1% in January, then there was a slight increase of 2% in Feburary. After that, the price sharply decreased to -1% in June. From July to Septamber it remained constant at 0%, and then there was gradual rise of 4% in December.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

price: 7

remained: 4

january: 3

march: 3

after: 3

december: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is incorrectly stated (Zinc is said to increase slightly, but it actually fluctuates and ends lower). Many specific data points are wrong (e.g., Copper starts at 2% instead of -1%, Nickel starts at 6% instead of 5%, Zinc starts at 1% instead of 6.5%). There are also inconsistencies and repetitions (e.g., Copper described twice with different values). The report lacks clear comparisons between metals and fails to highlight key features such as the initial high values and subsequent declines. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends and making relevant comparisons, ensuring data is correctly reported.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the body paragraphs lack clear organization and logical progression. The description of each metal is somewhat jumbled, with dates and values not presented in a coherent order (e.g., mentioning July before June for Nickel). Transitions between sentences are sometimes abrupt, and the use of cohesive devices is limited. To improve, group information by metal and present changes chronologically, using a range of linking words and referencing to ensure smooth flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'steadily declined', 'remained stable', and 'significantly rose'. However, there is repetition (e.g., 'remained stable' used multiple times) and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'slighty' for 'slightly', 'reached to' instead of 'reached'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and more sophisticated and varied expressions could be used to describe trends and changes. To improve, expand your range of synonyms for describing increases, decreases, and stability, and ensure correct word forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include 'the the price' (duplicate article), 'slighty' (misspelling), 'then reached to' (incorrect preposition), 'in July reached to' (missing subject), and 'Septamber' (misspelling). There are also issues with verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. To improve, proofread carefully for spelling and article errors, and practice using a wider range of grammatical structures with accuracy.

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