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Band 6+: The graph below shows the immigration rate of three different countries from 2005 to 2020.

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The image shows an immigration rate from 1960 to 2020 with: China at 10% in 1960, rising to 15% by 1980, 20% by 2000, and 27% by 2020; Japan remains nearly constant around 12% in 1960, dips slightly to 10% by 1980, then increases to 15% by 2020; Russia starts at 25% in 1960, drops sharply to 15% by 1980, continues to decline to 10% by 2000, and reaches 5% by 2020.

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The chart illustrates the percentage of immigrants in three different nations between 2005 and 2020.

Overall, the immigration rate in China and Japan increased throughout the period. Meanwhile this figure declined in Russia becoming the last at the rate shifting with China.

The number of immigrants in China experienced a dramatic growth in the given 40 years. Beginning as the lowest immigration rate with only 5% in 1960, China reached the peak in 2020 with around 27% becoming a country with the highest number of refugees. There was a significant drop of this number in Russia from 25% in 1960 to less than 5% in 2000. Russia faced a slight rise in 2020 to just over 5%.

This rate remained relatively the same for Japan. There was a gradual fall in this percentage in 1980 to just around 10%. After that, the number of refugees in Japan started growing constantly to just over 15% in 20

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china: 3

japan: 3

russia: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the data presented in the graph, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented. For example, the time frame mentioned in the introduction (2005-2020) does not align with the data provided in the description (1960-2020), and the report itself discusses figures from 1960. Additionally, the report does not fully capture the trends for all countries as described. Ensure that the introduction accurately reflects the data period and that all key trends are covered.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing. The use of linking words and phrases helps to connect ideas, making the report easy to follow. However, some transitions could be smoother to enhance overall flow.

Lexical Resource

A good range of vocabulary is used to describe the trends, with words like 'dramatic growth', 'significant drop', and 'gradual fall' being appropriate. There is a good attempt at using less common vocabulary, contributing to a natural feel. Some minor improvements in word choice could further enhance precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a range of grammatical structures. However, there are some errors in grammar and punctuation that occasionally impede clarity. Focusing on sentence construction and ensuring accurate verb tenses and prepositions would be beneficial.

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