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The image shows a line graph titled "Number of enquiries to Tourist Information Office" with three types of enquiries: in person (dashed line), by telephone (dotted line), and by email/letter (solid line); January has the lowest enquiries for all types, with in-person enquiries peaking at around 800 in April, by telephone peaking at around 1300 in May, and by email/letter remaining consistently below 200 throughout.

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The graph illustrates the number of enquires made to the Tourist information Office by three different means:In person,by telephone and by email or letter from January to June.

Overall, the number of enquires made in person and by telephone increased over the period while those email and letter declined steadily.

At the beginning of the period, in January, enquires made in person were the lowest at around 400. However, this figure rose rapidly and became the highest by June, reaching about 1,200. Similarly, the number of telephone enquires fluctuated slightly at first but increased significantly from March onwards, ending at around 1,000.

In contrast, enquires by email or letter showed a gradual decline. Starting at about 800 in January, the figure dropped steadily to just over 300 by June.

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telephone: 3

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january: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and key features of the graph, providing a general overview and some specific details. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that in-person inquiries were the highest by June, reaching about 1,200, but the graph shows the peak for in-person inquiries was in April at around 800, and the June value is lower. Also, the report mentions that email/letter inquiries started at about 800 in January, but the graph shows a much lower value, closer to 200. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and consider including more specific comparisons or contrasts between the different types of inquiries. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a clear overview and identifies the main trends. However, the organization could be improved by grouping similar trends together more explicitly. Transitions between paragraphs could also be smoother to enhance the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the trends and data. However, there's room to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to add more precision and sophistication to the descriptions. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'increased' or 'declined,' consider using synonyms like 'surged,' 'plummeted,' or 'diminished.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a fair range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct verb tense usage. Pay close attention to punctuation to avoid run-on sentences and improve readability.

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