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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of the new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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The image shows a line graph comparing closures and openings from 2011 to 2018, with closures represented by a solid line and openings by a dashed line. In 2011, there were approximately 8,500 closures and 7,500 openings; in 2012, 7,500 closures and 6,500 openings; in 2013, 6,500 closures and 7,000 openings; in 2014, 8,000 closures and 4,000 openings; in 2015, 3,000 closures and 4,000 openings; in 2016, 5,500 closures and 5,500 openings; in 2017, 6,000 closures and openings; and in 2018, 5,500 closures and 5,000 openings.

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The graph illustrates the number of shops opened and closed between 2011 and 2018 in a single country.

First of all, in 2018, there were a huge number of stalls closed almost 8,500—and it was the highest among all the years. On the other hand, 6500 shops opened in the same year.

Moreover, in 2014, the number of shops opened and closed was almost the same, around 6,500. But in 2015, the scene was completely different because only 500 shops opened that year, and that was the lowest throughout all the years. Furthermore, in 2013, more than 7,000 shops opened. It was the record breaking shop opening among all the years.

The number of stalls opened and closed fluctuated a lot between 2011 and 2016. Although, from 2016 to 2018, stalls opened in constant. Also, it was a huge increase from 500 to 5000 shops opened. Almost 10 times more than the previous year.

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opened: 8

shops: 6

number: 4

closed: 4

stalls: 3

almost: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the highest number of closures was not in 2018, but in 2011. Additionally, the report does not provide a clear overview of the main trends and patterns in the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is mostly coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The writer jumps between different years and ideas without clear connections. The use of transitional phrases and linking words is limited.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The writer uses some basic vocabulary accurately, but there is a lack of precise and sophisticated vocabulary. The use of phrases like 'huge number' and 'record breaking' is not very precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The writer uses a range of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement errors and incorrect use of tenses. Punctuation is mostly correct, but there are some minor errors.

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