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Band 5+: The graph below shows the percentage of adults according to age and gender who do not do any physical activity in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar graph depicting the percentage of Australian adults by age group and gender who do not engage in physical activity; Male: 15-24 (20%), 25-34 (30%), 35-44 (35%), 45-54 (40%), 55-64 (45%), 65-74 (50%), 75+ (55%); Female: 15-24 (25%), 25-34 (30%), 35-44 (33%), 45-54 (42%), 55-64 (48%), 65-74 (55%), 75+ (60%).

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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of men and women of 7 different age groups who lead a sedentary life in Australia.

In general, it is clear that except for the 45 to 64 years, all other age groups have more female than males who do not much physical activists.

One the one hand, the 15-24 year age group is the most with only about 14 and 17% men and women respectively who don’t do much physical activists. The 25-34 groups has a little more percentage of people following a leisurely way of life

On the others hand, as age advance the percentage of easy – going men and women also seen to be on the rise, with the exception of the 65-74 age groups surprisingly, in this group the number of males and female doing no physical activists is lessar than that of the 55-64 age group. However, the 75 age group has the maximum number of both gender doing no physical work.

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The main features of the graph are presented, but some details are inaccurate and the comparisons are not always clearly expressed. The response adequately fulfills the task requirements, but greater precision is needed.

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Band 5+: The graph below shows the percentage of adults according to age and gender who do not do any physical activity in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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