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Band 4+: The graph below shows the percentage of car ownership in one country between 1995 and 2015 (with predicted figures for 2025). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar graph with car ownership percentages for the years 1995, 2005, 2015, and a prediction for 2025. In 1995: No car - 50%, One car - 30%, Two or more cars - 20%. In 2005: No car - 43%, One car - 35%, Two or more cars - 22%. In 2015: No car - 30%, One car - 38%, Two or more cars - 32%. Predicted for 2025: No car - 25%, One car - 40%, Two or more cars - 35%.

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The bar chart depict percentage of car ownership in two decades. Overall one car dominated for twenty years

In 1995 people with no car percentage is under 40% and one car is somewhere in between 40%-50% and two or more car is quarter percent. In 2005 people with no car percentage is 30% and one car is approximately 40%, meanwhile with two or more car is almost 30%

In 2015 percentage people with no car somewhere in between 20-30%, people with one car is above 40% and then two or more cars is 30%. In the last 2025 people with no car and one car is equal in 30% and the other hand with two or more cars is 40%

In conclusion, percentage of no car in one country is decrease and increase little in 2025. Percentage of one car is fluctuative and last people with two or more cars increase from 1995 until 2025

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percentage: 6

people: 6

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the main trends in car ownership but contains inaccuracies and lacks specific data. The language is also imprecise. To improve, focus on providing accurate data points and using more precise language to describe the trends. Also, ensure that the overview captures the main trends effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons effectively. Paragraphing is not well-managed, and the transitions between different time periods are abrupt. To improve coherence, consider structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices such as transition words and phrases to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is a reliance on general terms like 'somewhere in between' and 'approximately,' which do not convey specific information accurately. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate more precise vocabulary related to trends and data analysis, such as 'declined,' 'increased,' 'remained stable,' or 'fluctuated.' Also, vary your word choices to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly and paying attention to basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your report.

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