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Band 5+: The graph below shows the percentage of people in 4 age groups who visited the cinema once a month or more from 1984 to 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph illustrating the percentage of people in 4 age groups who visited the cinema at least once a month between 1984 and 2003, with a vertical axis from 0% to 60%. For the 15-24 age group, the percentage points are approximately: 17 (1984), 25, 20, 23, 25, 30, 33, 43, 38, 33, 49, 38, 40, 50, 58, and 52 (2003). For the 7-14 age group, the points are: 10 (1984), 16, 12, 12, 18, 16, 12, 15, 22, 30, 22, 38, and 30 (2003). For the 25-35 age group, the percentages are: 4 (1984), 8, 6, 8, 10, 12, 20, 20, 18, 20, 33, and 22 (2003). For the 35 and over age group, the data points are: 2 (1984), 0, 3, 0, 2, 4, 5, 5, 6, 8, 10, and 13 (2003).

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The graph below illustrates the percentage of people in 4 various age groups who visited the cinema once a month or more between 1984 and 2003. Overall, individuals whose age 15-24 has stayed at top while, people at the age 35 and cover remained as the least over the years and the number of all visitors showed slight improvement.

From 1984 to 1003 mostly youth demonstrated noticeably fluctuation. Until 1992 their number rose but then it started to up and down and peaked at nearly 60% in 2003. However, another age group(35 and cover) that started with zero percentage visitors ended up with 10% visitors in the end of the given period.

In contrast, young children also experienced considerable improvement over the years even though they could not reach 20% for almost a decade until 2000, from then the percentages showed approxmetly 40%. Following by next age group 25-35, this age group showed familiar growth as people at the age of 7-14.

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Task Response

The report identifies some overall trends and provides some specific data points, but it lacks a clear structure and sufficient detail to fully address the task. The language is not always precise, and there are some grammatical errors. To improve, focus on organizing the information more logically, providing more specific data to support your observations, and ensuring accuracy in your language.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Transitions between ideas are not always smooth, affecting the overall coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to better group related information. For example, the second paragraph attempts to describe the 15-24 and 35+ age groups but lacks clear connection between the two. Consider using more effective transition words and phrases to link ideas and improve the logical flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice ('cover' instead of 'over'). There is an attempt to use descriptive language ('noticeably fluctuation,' 'considerable improvement'), but the impact is lessened by grammatical errors. To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., 'increased steadily,' 'fluctuated significantly') and ensure accurate usage.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors in verb tense ('age 15-24 has stayed'), subject-verb agreement ('number of all visitors showed'), and article usage ('the age 35 and cover') are frequent. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in tense, agreement, and word order. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct mistakes.

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