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Band 6+: The graph below shows the percentage of people in 4 age groups who visited the cinema once a month or more from 1984 to 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph illustrating the percentage of people in 4 age groups who visited the cinema at least once a month between 1984 and 2003, with a vertical axis from 0% to 60%. For the 15-24 age group, the percentage points are approximately: 17 (1984), 25, 20, 23, 25, 30, 33, 43, 38, 33, 49, 38, 40, 50, 58, and 52 (2003). For the 7-14 age group, the points are: 10 (1984), 16, 12, 12, 18, 16, 12, 15, 22, 30, 22, 38, and 30 (2003). For the 25-35 age group, the percentages are: 4 (1984), 8, 6, 8, 10, 12, 20, 20, 18, 20, 33, and 22 (2003). For the 35 and over age group, the data points are: 2 (1984), 0, 3, 0, 2, 4, 5, 5, 6, 8, 10, and 13 (2003).

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The line graph illustrates the propotion of people in four age groups which visited the cinema at least once a month from 1984 to 2003.

Overall, it is clear that participants from 15 to 24 age have the highest percentage of visitors throughout the period. Meanwhile the lowest percentage had group from 35 age and over.

With regard to the highest group of participants, from 1984 to 1992 number of people climbed consistently. The figures grew significantly over the last 3 years, reaching 58 % in 2003. On the second place stood group of children 7-14 years old, development took place in the same way as group of people 15-24 years. From 1984 to 1998, the percentage climbed slowly, data had changed on 20 percent. Over the last 3 years the propotion of people rose rapidly on 10%.

In contrast to the highest group, the lowest group included people from 35+ years. Between 1984 and 1988 inclusive, the percentage of people remained stable about 2 percent. After 1988 the percentage of participants witnessed a modest growth on 7%. Over the last 1,5 year number increased substantially, reaching 13%. Whereas group of 25-35 year stoof at third place that stood at 25% in 1998, and the highest percentage was 33 %, that did not change for two yers, from 2001 to 2002.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

group: 7

people: 6

percentage: 6

years: 5

highest: 4

participants: 3

place: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes some comparisons, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report mentions the figures grew significantly over the last 3 years, reaching 58 % in 2003 for the 15-24 age group, but this peak was actually in 2002. Also, the report mentions that the 25-35 age group stood at 25% in 1998, but the graph shows it was closer to 20%. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and include more specific data points to support your descriptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The progression of ideas is not always smooth, and some sentences feel disjointed. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related information and improve readability. Transitions between paragraphs and ideas need strengthening to create a more cohesive narrative. For example, the shift from the highest group to the second highest and then to the lowest group feels abrupt. Consider using transitional phrases to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise. Some phrases are slightly awkward or unnatural. For example, 'number of people climbed consistently' could be rephrased for better clarity and impact. To enhance lexical resource, focus on using synonyms and varied sentence structures to express the same information in different ways. Also, pay attention to the correct usage of prepositions and articles. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect tense usage, and awkward phrasing are present. For example, 'participants from 15 to 24 age have the highest percentage' should be 'participants from 15 to 24 have the highest percentage'. There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report and focus on correcting common errors. Consider using a grammar checker and reviewing basic grammar rules.

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