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Band 7+: The graph below shows the percentage of people who accessed the internet through different devices from 2010 to 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows percentage of people using different devices for internet access from 2010 to 2020: Desktop Computers at 60% in 2010, 40% in 2015, 20% in 2020; Smartphones at 20% in 2010, 40% in 2015, 60% in 2020; Laptops at 40% in 2010, 38% in 2015, 35% in 2020; Tablets at 10% in 2010, 20% in 2015, 25% in 2020.

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The given graph illustrates the different devices usage for internet access in percentage during 2010 and 2020. Overall, it is clearly seen that the most common devices used by people to access the internet changed from dekstop computers to smartphones in a decade.

Dekstop computers were the most popular devices in 2010, representing a half of all devices, yet they declined to around more than a third in 5 years and hit a low of a fifth at the end of the period. The second common device in 2010 were laptops at less than a third, increased slightly by two-fifths in 2015 and declined a bit to only over a third by 2020.

The lowest devices used in 2015 were both smartphones and tablets at only one in ten. The smartphones rose dramatically all over the period, hit over a third in 2015, afterwards reached their peak at three-fifths 5 years later. 2015 saw a slight growth of tablets usage by a fifth, and then remained stable until the end of the period.

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The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., 'Dekstop computers were the most popular devices in 2010, representing a half of all devices' - should be 60%). Also, the last sentence is a bit awkward ('2015 saw a slight growth of tablets usage by a fifth, and then remained stable until the end of the period.'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and clarity in sentence structure.

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The report presents a generally clear overview of the data. However, there are instances where the flow could be improved. For example, the transition between the second and third paragraphs could be smoother. Consider using transitional phrases to link ideas more effectively and enhance the overall coherence.

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The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the data. However, there's room to enhance the precision and sophistication of word choice. For instance, instead of 'hit a low of a fifth,' consider using more precise language like 'decreased to 20%'. Also, explore synonyms for words like 'common' and 'declined' to add variety.

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The report generally demonstrates good grammatical control, but there are a few errors that affect clarity. For example, 'Dekstop computers were the most popular devices in 2010, representing a half of all devices, yet they declined to around more than a third in 5 years and hit a low of a fifth at the end of the period.' could be rephrased for better accuracy. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement throughout the report.

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