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Band 5+: The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a certain country that had Internet access between 2011 and 2016. Summarize' the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a graph of household internet access (percentage-wise) for urban/suburban and rural households between 2011 and 2016. Urban/Suburban access starts at 30% in 2011, increases to 35% in 2012, 45% in 2013, around 47% in 2014, approximately 53% in 2015 and peaks at 55% in 2016. Rural access starts at slightly below 5% in 2011, rises to just above 10% in 2012, climbs to roughly 15% in 2013, around 20% in 2014, approximately 23% in 2015, and reaches around 25% in 2016.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of households with Internet access over a five years period from 2011 to 2016.

Overall, internet penetration increased steadily by years. urban/suburban areas maintaining consistently higher levels than rual areas.

In 2011, nearly noone was connected to the internet. In contrast, the figures for urban/suburban areas were significantly higher, standing at around and . Over the five years, all areas experienced marked growth. Urban areas saw the most dramatic rise, with internet access reaching roughly by 2016. While the rural area followed with .

Every areas showed consistent upward trends, although they were less pronounced. In summary, although all areas experienced substantial growth in household internet access, urban/suburban areas remained clear leaders over the entire timeframe.

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internet: 5

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Task Response

The report addresses the task requirements and provides a general overview of the data, highlighting the main trends and differences between urban/suburban and rural areas. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data reported. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and include more specific figures to support your summary. Also, avoid overly general statements like "nearly no one was connected to the internet" when the graph shows a specific percentage. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates an adequate arrangement of information, generally presenting a clear overview and highlighting key trends. However, the flow between sentences and ideas could be improved to enhance coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. For example, transition words or phrases could be incorporated to clarify the relationships between different points in the data. Additionally, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve the overall structure and clarity of the report.

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The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the main points of the graph. However, there are instances where the language could be more precise and sophisticated. For example, instead of using general terms like 'increased steadily,' consider using more specific vocabulary to describe the rate of change, such as 'gradually increased' or 'rose sharply.' Additionally, explore synonyms for commonly used words to add variety and depth to your writing. Pay attention to the appropriate use of collocations and idiomatic expressions to enhance the naturalness of your language.

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The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, with generally accurate sentence structures. However, there are some grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. Ensure subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation throughout the report. Additionally, pay attention to sentence construction to avoid awkward phrasing or ambiguity. Review your work carefully to identify and correct any grammatical errors or inconsistencies. Consider seeking feedback from a language tutor or using grammar-checking tools to improve your accuracy.

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