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The image charts the percentage of the population aged 65 and older spanning ninety years (1940-2040) in Japan, Sweden, and the USA. Japan's population aged 65+ started at 5% in 1940, hit 10% by 1990, and is projected to reach 30% by 2040. Sweden's proportion began at 7% in 1940, reaching 17% by 1990, and anticipating 25% by 2040. The USA's percentage commenced at 8% in 1940, achieving 13% by 1990, and expecting to hit nearly 23% by 2040.

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The line graph gives information regarding the ratio of the people aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in Japan, Sweden and USA.

Overall it is clear that the population of Japan is expected to increase dramatically whereas the population of elderly people of Sweden and USA surged gradually over the years.

In 1940, the population of people aged 65 and over was at 5% for japan, at approximately 7% for sweden and almost 9% for USA. Then in the year 1960, the population increased gradually for both Sweden and USA to just under 7% for sweden and exactly 10% for the USA. On the flip side, the population of Japan decreased to about 3%.

In 2020, the population of Japan and Sweden rose gently. However, the population of USA plunged slightly to about 18% from 20%. In 2040, the population of senior citizens in all three countries is expected to go up. The USA and Sweden will have a gentle soar. In contrast, the population of japan is anticipated to skyrocket from 10% to nearly 27%.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data, which detract from the overall achievement. The description of trends is sometimes unclear and contains errors. To improve, ensure data accuracy and clarity in trend descriptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a basic overview of the data but suffers from some organizational issues. The information is not always presented in a logical order, and there are abrupt transitions between time periods and countries. To improve coherence, try to group information more effectively, perhaps by country or by time period, and use clearer transition phrases to guide the reader through the data. Paragraphing could be improved to reflect the main trends and comparisons more clearly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively simple and lacks the precision needed to accurately describe the trends in the graph. There is some repetition of words like 'population,' 'increase,' and 'gradually.' To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and proportions, such as 'rose,' 'declined,' 'plateaued,' 'percentage,' 'proportion,' and 'ratio.' Using more precise language will make the report more informative and engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and the use of prepositions. For example, 'population of elderly people of Sweden and USA surged gradually' and 'population of Japan decreased to about 3%' contain errors. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report for errors in tense, agreement, and word choice. Practice using a variety of sentence structures to enhance grammatical range.

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