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Band 5+: The graph illustrates trendsin music buying habits between 2011 and 2018.

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The image depicts a line graph illustrating music buying habits from 2011 to 2018, showcasing percentage of total music sales by CDs, Downloads, and Streams. CD sales decrease from roughly 45% in 2011 to about 10% in 2018; Downloads rise from 10% to a peak near 50% in 2013, then decline to below 10% in 2018; Streams begin around 5% in 2011, surpass Downloads and CDs around 2015 and 2016 respectively, reaching around 45% in 2018.

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The graph shows periods of the song purchasing habits in a period of eight years.

Overall, in 2011, all CDs, downloads and streams started in three different ways. CD s and downloads made slight decrease through the entire period while streams made a significant increase in all years.

CDs started in a dramatic decrease of just over 54% in the year 2001 until they stopped at 20% in 2018. On the other hand, downloads commenced with about 35% and made a slow rise of around 45% in the year 2014 and then it started a small decline to 30% in 2008.

Sales of streams began with just around 5% in 2011 and went up dramatically to 20% where they started again until they reached in the last stop of 40% in the year 2018. In addition to that, or as can be seen from the graph, CDs and downloads made a dramatic decrease while streams did noticeable rise.

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The report provides an overview of the trends in music buying habits between 2011 and 2018, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Some sentences are unclear or repetitive.

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasings throughout the report. More precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the overall quality of the writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors present, such as verb tense inconsistencies and subject-verb agreement issues. More attention to grammar and sentence structure is needed for improvement.

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