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Band 4+: The graph shows demographical data corresponding to the quantity of immigrants to the United States between the years 1990 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: The graph shows demographical data corresponding to the quantity of immigrants to the United States between the years 1990 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a line graph of immigrants by category from 1990 to 2008, including Work Permits, Asylums, and Spouses. In 1990: Work Permits 20,000, Asylums 15,000, Spouses 10,000. By 1993: Work Permits remain 20,000, Asylums rise to 40,000, Spouses slightly below 20,000. In 1997: Work Permits approximately 25,000, Asylums 60,000, Spouses near 20,000. In 2001: Work Permits reach about 50,000, Asylums peak at 170,000, Spouses around 25,000. In 2005: Work Permits 90,000, Asylums drop to 60,000, Spouses around 25,000. By 2008: Work Permits near 120,000, Asylums roughly 50,000, Spouses around 25,000.

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The line graph demonstrates that how many immigrants flew to united states between the year of 1990 to 2008. There are various type of immigrants which are going as spouses , asylums and work permits .

overall , various kind of immigrant categories are going to united states but most of the them are on basis of work permits . work permiters are increasing through whole given period of time . whereas , asylums migrants have unstable graph showing the rapid drop down by the end of year .

There are around 2000 of spouses migrant which were mostly stable till year 1998 and then an upward trend was seen . likewise , immigrants who are going on basis of work permits are same as the number of spouse going , but by the year of 1996 it has witnessed substanial growth which was about 13000 imigrants flew .

On the other hand , the chart described flucuating asylum migrants , as in year of 1990 atfirst it was aprroximatley 3000 and rose upto 6000 immigrants . However , during 2002 the number of migrants were at its peak which is about 16000 but then steadily droped down to 2000 in the end of year .

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

immigrants: 4

which: 4

going: 4

permits: 3

migrants: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies in data reporting that obscure the main trends. The numbers provided in the report (e.g., 2000, 13000, 16000) differ drastically from the values provided in the visual description (e.g., 20,000, 120,000, 170,000), which makes the summary unreliable. Additionally, while an overview is provided, the comparisons between categories are often contradictory or unclear. To improve, focus on accurately extracting the numerical data from the graph and ensure that the trends described (increasing, decreasing, or fluctuating) align with the actual figures presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is hindered by frequent errors in sentence structure and punctuation. The use of cohesive devices (e.g., 'overall', 'on the other hand', 'likewise') is present, but they are often used incorrectly or preceded by improper spacing. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between sentences flow naturally without relying on repetitive or misplaced linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used inaccurately. There are several instances of non-standard phrasing, such as 'work permiters' and 'spouses migrant'. Additionally, there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'flucuating', 'aprroximatley', 'substanial', 'droped'). To improve, focus on learning academic collocations related to trends (e.g., 'experienced a significant increase' instead of 'witnessed substantial growth which was about...') and ensure correct spelling of common descriptive terms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage (e.g., 'to united states'), and sentence construction (e.g., 'demonstrates that how many'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with the placement of spaces before commas and periods. I recommend practicing basic sentence structures and focusing on the correct use of tenses when describing historical data (past tense should be used consistently).

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