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Band 5+: The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period

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The image shows a graph with three lines from 1953 to 1983. Price of color TV: 1953 - none, 1963 - 100,000 Yen, 1973 - 60,000 Yen, 1983 - 50,000 Yen. Price of black and white TV: 1953 - 90,000 Yen, 1963 - 30,000 Yen, 1973 - 10,000 Yen, 1983 - 5,000 Yen. Salary: 1953 - 20,000 Yen, 1963 - 40,000 Yen, 1973 - 60,000 Yen, 1983 - 100,000 Yen.

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The line graph illustrates the total income of Japanese as well as the pricing of black and white and color television over a period of thirty years.

Overall, it is evident that the salaries increased significantly from 1963 to 1983. Meanwhile, the figure of consumers of Japanese tend to use color television was higher than black and while television after 1963.

In 1953, the prices of black and white television reached a peak of 110.000 yen; however, the figures plunged around 40.000 and to 20.000 yen in 1983. The cost of color television began high around in 1960, then decreased dramatically from 100.000 yen to 68.000 yen and continued to decline to just under 50.000 yen in 1983.

Nevertheless, the income of Japanese followed the opposite trend; the salaries rose slightly, approximately by 19.000 yen in 1953 to 30.000 yen in 1973, and overtook the cost of both types of television around 69.000 yen in 1983.

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