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Band 5+: The graph shows the popularity of Pop Music in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph titled "Pop Music Sales (in thousand units)" displaying sales data from 2000 to 2020; 2000: 0, 2005: approximately 25,000, 2010: around 30,000, 2015: about 25,000, 2020: roughly 110,000; noticeable trends include a steady rise from 2000 to 2005, slight increase to 2010, dip back to 2000 levels by 2015, followed by a sharp ascent leading to 2020 peak.

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This line graph illustrates the sale of Pop Music over the past two decades (2000 – 2020).

Overall, it is readily apparent that sale of Pop music has reached a peak in the year 2020 which is directly proportional to its popularity whereas it has the least level of sales in the year 2000.

Firstly, in 2000, it has started at 10k sales gradually increased to 30k sales in 2005 and reached a initial high at 2008. After that, it has gradually reduced to 20k sales in 2010.

Secondly, in 2015, buys of music has gone to 75k while in the year 2012 it has faced a major dip of 10k in the sales that was the major downfall in the sales of music after a decade. Purchases of Pop music has significantly increased after the year 2012 and hit a peak at 2020 with the buys of 110k which has touched a maximum number of sales over the last 20 years.

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The report provides a good overview of the main features of the graph, but it misses some key details and makes a few inaccuracies. The report could be improved by providing more specific data points and avoiding generalizations.

Coherence & Cohesion

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The report is generally coherent, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The use of transitions and connectors is inconsistent, and some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the overall coherence.

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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The report contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles. The report could be improved by paying more attention to grammar and punctuation.

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