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Band 5+: The graphs below show the global emission by industry sectors in 2020.

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The image features a pie chart and a donut chart detailing global emissions in 2020 by industry sectors: Overall industry accounts for 21%; transport comprises 14% of this, with planes at 10.6%, ships 11.2%, trucks 25%, and cars 41%, alongside other forms making up 4.5%; power generation totals 25%; waste contributes 3% with chemicals at 15% and cement at 13%; agriculture and land use stands at 24%, split with buildings at 6%; iron and steel represent 22% of emissions within the industry, while other sectors contribute the remaining 36%.

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The graphs illustrated emission globally caused by industry sectors in 2020.

There are three pie chart that delineate the contribution of each sectors to global emission. The first chart give information about the overall contribution, the following chart give details about transport contribution, and the last chart show industry contribution.

Overall, the highest to the lowest contributions are from power, agriculture and land use, industry, transport, other, and buildings that stand at 25%, 24%, 21%, 14%, 10%, and 6%. Industry sector in third place, shared several factors that contribute emission such as iron and steel, chemicals, waste, cement, and other.

Transport that stand at fourth place with 14% contribution also shared several factors of emission. Trucks, ships, planes, and other with the percentage of 25%, 11.2%, 10.6%, and 4.5%, all four combine still cannot surpass cars emission percentage number with almost half of the chart at 47% contribution.

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industry: 4

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the information presented in the graphs. However, there are some areas for improvement. The organization could be enhanced by grouping related information more effectively. For instance, the details about the industry and transport sectors could be presented in separate paragraphs to improve clarity. Additionally, while the report mentions the main contributions, it could benefit from a more comprehensive overview of all the sectors and their relative importance. Including specific data points and comparisons more consistently throughout the report would also strengthen the analysis. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The introduction is weak, and the description of the charts is confusing. The flow of information is not smooth, and the connections between sentences and ideas are not always clear. Consider using more cohesive devices and organizing the information more logically, perhaps by dedicating a paragraph to each main sector or group of sectors.

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The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks precision and variety. There are instances of repetitive language. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to emissions, industries, and proportions. Consider using synonyms and more specific terms to describe the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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