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The image contains two pie charts detailing post-school qualifications for different age groups. The first chart represents 837,500 Australians aged 25-34 with degrees: Science, Maths, IT 20.24%; Engineering 13.17%; Medicine 5.73%; Law 2.48%; Social Sciences, Arts 30.11%; Architecture 3.34%; Veterinary, Agriculture 2.96%; Education 11.35%; Administration 7.61%; Other 2.00%. The second chart details 104,805 aged 55-69: Science, Maths, IT 19.48%; Engineering 7.40%; Medicine 4.82%; Law 2.24%; Social Sciences, Arts 14.76%; Architecture 9.36%; Veterinary, Agriculture 3.26%; Education 18.19%; Administration 19.08%; Other 1.40%.

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The two graphs give information on the changing proportion of post- school qualifications lite between the age of 25 to 34 and 55 to 69 in Australia. From an overall perspective, it can be clearly seen that there had significant difference on their main fields of study.

Architecture occupied the highest proportion at 19 48%. The second degree was science maths, information technology, which accounted for 18.19%. Administration had the number of 1908% at the age of 25 and to 34. And then law accounted for 14.76%, and Engineering occupied 9.36%. Medicine showed the number of 7.40%%. Other subjects only occupied 5.54% 2.24%. 2.1% and 1.85% from eduration other veterinary to architecture, resp- cetively.

Looking into the second graph. Social Scients. Arts accounted for 70%.42% The next was Engineering with 19.27%. Administration and Education had almost the same number of 14.90% and 13.17% respectively. Medicine on occupied 11.35% and Science accounted for 10.11%.

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The graphs show the post – qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69.

Provided are two pie charts illustrating Australian post-school degree in different age groups, including 25 – 34 and 55 – 69. Overall, at the age 25 to 34 represent 357,500 Australians receive qualifications and the age 55 to 69 contribute to 104,800. Furthermore, the field social sciences, arts in both age groups still significantly possesses […]

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The graphs show the post – qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69.

There are two pie charts, which demonstrate the post-school qualifications in Australians. Also there are two age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69. And the charts are included more than 10 post-school qualifications. Overall, there are more than 10 post-school qualifications such as Social Sciences, Arts, Law, Architecture, etc. the biggest proportions is […]

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