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The image contains two pie charts detailing post-school qualifications for different age groups. The first chart represents 837,500 Australians aged 25-34 with degrees: Science, Maths, IT 20.24%; Engineering 13.17%; Medicine 5.73%; Law 2.48%; Social Sciences, Arts 30.11%; Architecture 3.34%; Veterinary, Agriculture 2.96%; Education 11.35%; Administration 7.61%; Other 2.00%. The second chart details 104,805 aged 55-69: Science, Maths, IT 19.48%; Engineering 7.40%; Medicine 4.82%; Law 2.24%; Social Sciences, Arts 14.76%; Architecture 9.36%; Veterinary, Agriculture 3.26%; Education 18.19%; Administration 19.08%; Other 1.40%.

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There are two pie charts, which demonstrate the post-school qualifications in Australians. Also there are two age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69. And the charts are included more than 10 post-school qualifications.

Overall, there are more than 10 post-school qualifications such as Social Sciences, Arts, Law, Architecture, etc. the biggest proportions is the part Social Sciences, Arts in both.

In 25 and 34 year group, the biggest proportion is the Social Sciences, Art as I menioned. And 55-69 year group has same situation while the number is 20.42%. Otherwise the lowest proportion is the Architecture in 25 and 34 year group, it means the students has the lowest interest in that qualifications while 55-69 year old group are not interested in Veterinary, Agriculture.

Also there are so many qualifications. It also it is saying about the present study fields. Finally, the charts illustrate the interesting of students according to the proportions in the charts.

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qualifications: 4

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social: 3

sciences: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant issues. The information presented is somewhat repetitive and lacks specific data to support the general observations. The organization is weak, and the language is not precise enough to convey the information effectively. To improve, focus on providing specific data from the charts, organizing the information more logically (e.g., by comparing similar categories across age groups), and using more precise language to describe the trends and differences.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not logically connected, making it difficult to follow the information presented. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inappropriate, leading to a disjointed flow. For example, the transitions between sentences and paragraphs are abrupt. Improve the overall structure by grouping related information together and using transition words to guide the reader through the data. Each paragraph should focus on a specific aspect of the charts, such as overall trends, specific comparisons, or notable exceptions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, which limits the depth of the analysis. There is a reliance on simple words and phrases, and a lack of precision in describing the data. For instance, using 'biggest proportions' and repeating 'Social Sciences, Arts' without variation. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to data analysis and qualification types. Use synonyms and more specific terms to describe the trends and differences observed in the charts. For example, instead of 'biggest proportion,' consider using 'largest percentage' or 'predominant field.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. For example, 'the biggest proportions is the part Social Sciences, Arts' and 'students has the lowest interest.' Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Practice constructing more complex sentences while ensuring they are grammatically correct. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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