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Band 6+: The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Writing at least 150 words

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The image is a line graph titled "Survey results: reasons for moving" with the y-axis ranging from 10,000 to 100,000 and x-axis from 2000 to 2015 in 5-year increments; four lines represent different reasons - employment (lightest color), study (second lightest), family/friends (second darkest), adventure (darkest); employment line starts around 30,000 in 2000, gently rises to about 34,000 in 2005, steeply to about 65,000 in 2010, then more gently to just below 70,000 in 2015; study starts around 25,000 in 2000, gently rises to about 30,000 in 2005, steeply to about 57,000 in 2010, then more gently to just below 60,000 in 2015; family/friends starts around 12,000 in 2000, remains stable until 2005, rises slightly to about 15,000 in 2010, then sharply to about 40,000 in 2015; adventure starts around 20,000 in 2000, remains stable until 2005, rises slightly to about 22,000 in 2010, then steeply to about 85,000 in 2015.

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This graphic chart shows us some tendencies in emigration in a 15-year period and reasons for it including employment, academical reasons, reunion with families or friends and moving for adventures.

Overall, we can see that there is an upward trend in all lines of the chart. The most significant growth we can see is in the number of people moving for study. In 2000, it reaches only below 30000 migration figures compared to almost 90000 in 2015.

A similar increase is in the number of emigrants for employment. It starts with 60000 in 2000 and levels off at around 90000 in 2015. Plateauing in 2010, in 2015, this number decreases genly and meets the figure of academical migration.

The number of migration figures for their families or for adventures increases only slightly in 15 years: from 10000 to 20000 in moving for families and 10000 to 15000 in moving for adventure.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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number: 4

families: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the upward trend and mentions some key figures, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported. The description of the trends is not always clear, and some comparisons could be more explicit. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and making clear comparisons between the different categories. Also, ensure that the overall trends and specific data points are correctly stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. Transitions between ideas are sometimes abrupt, and the connection between sentences within paragraphs isn't always clear. For instance, the shift from employment to study in the second paragraph feels disjointed. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the information. Paragraphing is generally acceptable, but could be refined to better reflect the main trends and supporting details.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise. For example, 'emigration' is used when 'migration' would be more appropriate, as the chart refers to movement to the capital city, not necessarily out of the country. 'Academical reasons' could be improved to 'academic reasons' or 'for study'. Expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and changes would enhance the report. Also, avoid repetition by using synonyms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'This graphic chart shows us some tendencies in emigration' could be rephrased for better accuracy and conciseness. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement ('it reaches only below 30000 migration figures') and incorrect preposition use ('in moving for families'). Sentence structure is generally simple, and while this aids in avoiding errors, it also limits the complexity of the analysis. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and experimenting with more complex sentence structures to enhance the overall quality of the report.

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