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Band 6+: The line graph above shows the number of international tourists (in millions) visiting three countries between 2010 and 2020.

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The image presents a line graph of international tourist arrivals (in millions) for three countries from 2010 to 2020. The 2010 and 2020 arrivals were, respectively: Country A, approximately 20 and 32; Country B, approximately 15 and 28; and Country C, approximately 9 and 27.

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The given picture illustrates the number of international visitors travelling three countries from the year 2010 to 2020.

Overall, Country A dominated the tourist industry with the largest number of visitors across the time period. All three countries had a significant increase over a decade where Country B and C were accounted almost same at the end.

Looking at the image for more details, in the year 2010, Country A had the maximum numbers of visitors with almost 20 million people. After a decade, Country A still dominated the international tourists market. The number of tourists rose significantly and reached 32 millions visitors.

On the other hand, it is noticeable that almost 16 millions people prefered Country B in the initial year. Similarly, Country B experienced a dramatic growth and reached almost 28 millions of visitors by the end of the year. In the year 2010, Country C was least favoured and was accounted more than 8 millions of people. Like wise, Country C faced rise in toursists visiting the country and reached almost 28 millions of visitors.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

country: 9

visitors: 5

almost: 5

millions: 5

number: 3

people: 3

reached: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and data points, including the overall dominance of Country A and the significant increases for all three countries. However, there are minor inaccuracies (e.g., Country C's final value is stated as 'almost 28' instead of '27') and some omissions (e.g., no specific mention of Country C's growth rate or comparison of trends). The structure is clear, with an overview and detailed paragraphs, but the language could be more precise and varied. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and consider adding more comparative language to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'Country B and C were accounted almost same at the end'). The use of cohesive devices is limited, and the final sentence is repetitive. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea with smooth transitions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at synonyms (e.g., 'dominated', 'significant increase', 'dramatic growth'). However, there are inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'visitors' used repeatedly, 'travelling three countries' should be 'travelling to three countries'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'Like wise' and 'accounted almost same'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity (e.g., 'prefered' should be 'preferred', 'millions' should be 'million' when used with a number, 'toursists' is misspelled, and 'Like wise' should be 'Likewise'). To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, correct use of plural forms, and ensure consistent tense usage. Also, vary sentence structures to demonstrate greater grammatical range.

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