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Band 4+: The line graph below gives information about men and women smokers in Bhutan from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Men & Women Smokers in Bhutan (per 1000)" from 1960 to 2000 at intervals of 5 years; Men smokers: 1960-600, 1965-550, 1970-525, 1975-500, 1980-450, 1985-425, 1990-400, 1995-375, 2000-350; Women smokers: 1960-75, 1965-150, 1970-200, 1975-250, 1980-300, 1985-350, 1990-325, 1995-300, 2000-275.

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The line grapgh compares women and men smokers in Bhutan in terms of their percentage for 40 years starting from 1960. Overall, men smokers’ percentage experienced downward trend while opposite was true for women’s. Notebly, in 1975 women smokers’ percentage expe peak time comparing with other years.

According to the graph, in the beginning year men smokers were a lot, the percentage was 600. Then year by year the percentage started to slightly decline. In each year it only decreased without any grow. In a final year it became 300 percent. From 1960 till 2000 the percentage started fell by half.

Turning to the data for women, their smoking pecentage followed the opposite pattern , rising gradually throughout the 40-year period. The surprising thing is that in 1960 the women smokers’ percentage was equal to 0. However, after this year it significantly rised. The peak percentage was in 1975. The smokers’ percentage grew till 1975 in that year it was 350%. Then it started to gradually decrease. In a final year it became 100% only. Comparing to 1960, in 2000 percentage’s difference was lone 100.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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percentage: 9

women: 4

smokers': 4

started: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, describing the trends in men and women smokers in Bhutan. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with the clarity of the language used. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph and use more precise language to describe the trends and changes over time. Also, ensure that the overall structure of the report is clear and logical.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, and the transitions between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The overall structure needs improvement to enhance readability and understanding. For example, the description of the trends for men and women could be better structured to highlight the contrasting patterns more effectively. Paragraphing needs significant improvement to separate distinct ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and a failure to use a range of vocabulary to describe the trends and data accurately. For example, using more specific terms to describe the rate of increase or decrease would improve the report. Consider using synonyms and varied vocabulary to avoid repetition and enhance the overall quality of the writing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. These errors significantly impede understanding. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction to enhance clarity and accuracy. For example, pay attention to correct tense usage when describing past trends and ensure subject-verb agreement in all sentences.

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