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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a line graph and table. The line graph depicts a gradual increase in visits to Australia by overseas residents from 1975 to 2005 with data points at 8 million (1975), 16 million (1985), 24 million (1995), and 31 million (2005). The table presents the number of visitors (in millions) from various countries in 1975 and 2005: South Korea (2.9, 9.1), Japan (3.2, 12.0), China (0.3, 0.8), USA (0.4, 1.1), Britain (0.9, 2.9), Europe (1.1, 4.5), with total visitors at 8.8 million in 1975 and 30.4 million in 2005.

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The line graph provides data on overseas travel to Australia between 1975 and 2005, while the table illustrates the origin of those visitors.

Overall, there was a significant increas of the number of travellers over the period. South Korea and Japan owned the higher positions from the begining and stayed the leaders. While China and USA contributed the lowest number in both years.

In 1975 the total number of visitors to Australia was 8.8 millions. Then it gradually improved to 24 million by the end of a three-decade period. The biggest contribution was from Japan, the number grew from 3.2 to 2 million. Similar situation was with people from South Korea – 9.1 million in 2005, while 2.9 was the start point.

Indicators for Europe and Britain were lower, but also demonstrated a significant growth. Meanwhile, USA and Chine, which began with humble numbers, continued being countries with the minitory of tourists in 2005.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides relevant data from both the line graph and the table. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., "Japan grew from 3.2 to 2 million") and omissions (e.g., the total number of visitors in 2005). To improve, ensure data accuracy and include all key figures. Also, enhance the organization and flow of information for better clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. The overview is present but could be more impactful by summarizing the key trends more explicitly. The body paragraphs contain some disjointed sentences. For example, in the third paragraph, the sudden mention of Japan's growth to '2 million' is confusing since the graph shows 12 million. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and that sentences within a paragraph logically connect to support that focus. Improve the flow by using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'owned the higher positions,' 'humble numbers,' 'minitory of tourists'). Using a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'improved,' consider using 'increased,' 'rose,' or 'grew.' Instead of 'significant growth,' try 'substantial increase' or 'marked expansion.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'significant increas' (should be 'increase'), 'begining' (should be 'beginning'), and inconsistencies in number agreement (e.g., '8.8 millions' should be '8.8 million'). There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to correct these errors. Vary sentence structures to improve the flow and readability of the report.

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