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Band 7+: The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts four vertical bar graphs displaying various percentages for "Bangkok Zoo," "Sea World," "Wax museum," and "China town," with data for the years 2014, 2015, 2016, and 2017. Bangkok Zoo: 2014 - 30%, 2015 - 45%, 2016 - 75%, 2017 - 10%; Sea World: 2014 - 25%, 2015 - 50%, 2016 - 80%, 2017 - 25%; Wax Museum: 2014 - 45%, 2015 - 30%, 2016 - 10%, 2017 - 45%; China Town: 2014 - 15%, 2015 - 35%, 2016 - 5%, 2017 - 5%.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of visitors to four destinations in Bangkok, Thailand: Bangkok Zoo, Sea World, Wax Museum, and China town between 2014 and 2017.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there was an upward trend in the figure for the Wax Museum, while the figure for Bangkok Zoo, SeaWorld, and China town experienced downward trends over the period.

Looking at the chart in more detail, the percentage of tourists visiting Bangkok Zoo fell sharply from 50 percent in 2014 to around 22 percent in 2015, and then it rose slightly to approximately 26 percent in the final year. As for SeaWorld, the figure fell significantly from 70 percent to just below 50 percent in 2015, before witnessing a sharp decline to approximately 20 percent.

Meanwhile, an opposite trend can be observed in the proportion of Wax museum and China town. The share of tourists for the Wax Museum increased steadily to 80 percent in 2016 before ending the period at around 70 percent. Similarly, there was a dramatic increase to 80 percent in the figure for China town, reaching a peak of nearly 100 percent in 2016. However, it then fell suddenly to below 10 percent in 2017.

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percent: 10

bangkok: 4

museum: 4

china: 4

figure: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the four attractions and making some comparisons, but it contains significant inaccuracies in the data and trends. The overall trend statement is incorrect (e.g., Wax Museum is described as increasing, but it actually fluctuates; Bangkok Zoo and Sea World are described as decreasing, but they show peaks in 2016). Specific figures are also misreported (e.g., Bangkok Zoo 2014 is given as 50% instead of 30%, and 2015 as 22% instead of 45%). The report omits some key data points and misinterprets the trends, which detracts from task achievement. To improve, ensure accurate data extraction and a clear, correct overview of main trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the grouping of information could be improved: the overview mentions trends for all four attractions, but the detailed paragraphs mix them in a way that may confuse the reader. For example, the second paragraph discusses Bangkok Zoo and SeaWorld, while the third paragraph covers Wax Museum and China Town, but the trends described do not align with the overview. Ensure that the overview accurately reflects the main trends and that the body paragraphs are clearly separated by categories or time periods. Additionally, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'upward trend', 'downward trends', 'fell sharply', 'rose slightly', 'witnessing a sharp decline', 'increased steadily', 'dramatic increase', 'reaching a peak', 'fell suddenly'). However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions. For instance, 'SeaWorld' is written as 'Sea World' in the introduction but 'SeaWorld' later; ensure consistency. Also, 'China town' should be 'Chinatown' as a proper noun. The phrase 'the figure for the Wax Museum' is used, but later 'the proportion of Wax museum' is inconsistent. To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct spelling and capitalization.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. However, there are minor errors and awkward phrasings. For example, 'the figure for Bangkok Zoo, SeaWorld, and China town experienced downward trends' could be rephrased for clarity. Also, 'before witnessing a sharp decline' is slightly awkward; consider 'before declining sharply'. The sentence 'Similarly, there was a dramatic increase to 80 percent in the figure for China town, reaching a peak of nearly 100 percent in 2016' contains contradictory information (increase to 80% but peak of 100%). Ensure that data descriptions are accurate and consistent. Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but attention to detail is needed to avoid minor errors.

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