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Band 4+: The line graph gives information about music streaming preferences by genre among young people in Germany between 2010 and 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays a line graph showing percentages for four music genres—Hip-hop, Jazz, Classical music, and Electronic—from 2010 to 2022, with a vertical axis from 0 to 50. Hip-hop (%) values are: 2010-23, 2011-24, 2012-22, 2013-23, 2014-24, 2015-24, 2016-23, 2017-23, 2018-30, 2019-40, 2020-43, 2021-42, and 2022-45. Jazz (%) values are: 2010-35, 2011-24, 2012-12, 2013-13, 2014-22, 2015-24, 2016-26, 2017-28, 2018-29, 2019-34, 2020-36, 2021-34, and 2022-35. Classical music (%) values are: 2010-10, 2011-10, 2012-11, 2013-13, 2014-15, 2015-12, 2016-10, 2017-10, 2018-12, 2019-9, 2020-8, 2021-10, and 2022-10. Electronic (%) values are: 2010-21, 2011-24, 2012-23, 2013-25, 2014-22, 2015-26, 2016-24, 2017-21, 2018-34, 2019-36, 2020-43, 2021-44, and 2022-44.

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First thing I noticed is how young people loves electronic musics. This imagine shows at 2010 electronic musics are started good and local German young people loved it and it slowly became the most popular one in the country. And Jazz music started good at 2010,but it downfall at 2012. For decades it grow slowly however at 2022 ,in this imagine we see clearly good algorithm for jazz.

Next one is hip-hop. Hip hop started normal at first,no sudden “popularity” or “failture”. Therefore it seems like young german really into to the hip hop. At 2022,in this algorithm, hip hop looks like it’s competitive with Electronic music.

Lastly the classic German musics, at 2010 it started miserably and it ended as how it started.

Young people loves more flashly,louder,modern musics.Therefore In my perspective I understand German young people as its traditional but to be honest? Boring musics.

Only old people who listens these kind of musics nowadays.

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The report attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant and inappropriate personal opinions and subjective interpretations. The summary lacks specific data and accurate comparisons. To improve, focus on objectively describing the trends and data presented in the graph without injecting personal opinions or making broad generalizations about musical tastes. Include specific data points to support your observations and ensure a balanced representation of all genres.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, and the transitions between different music genres are abrupt. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate and organize the information. To improve coherence, consider structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on each genre, and a concluding summary. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information.

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The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary and frequent inaccuracies in word choice. There is over-reliance on simple words and phrases, and the language used is not always appropriate for an academic report. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider variety of vocabulary related to trends, popularity, and comparisons. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition. Pay attention to the correct usage of words in context.

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