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Band 5+: The line graph shows the average temperatures (°C) in London, New York, and Sydney in four different months: January, April, July, and October.

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The image contains a data table listing monthly temperatures for three cities: In January, London 4°C, New York 2°C, Sydney 23°C; in April, London 11°C, New York 12°C, Sydney 20°C; in July, London 19°C, New York 25°C, Sydney 17°C; in October, London 13°C, New York 14°C, Sydney 21°C.

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The table provides information about how average temperatures changed in four months and in three distinguish cities namely in London, New York, Sydney.

According to the survey,it appears that in July cities such as London and New York have shown highest average temperatures , while in Sydney highest average temperature was in January.

To begin with, at the beginning of the period average temperature of London was around 4 , whereas this figure has risen to 19 since in july. However this warm temperature declined on October marginally to 13C. Moreover in New York the temperature in January was too cold than in other cities, approximately 2. Furthermore, the average of temperature in New Yotk have grown to 12 in April and then reached a peak at 25 in July .

Likewise, Sydney’s average temperature in January was higher than in New york , london. However this average temperature have fallen to over 17 , after it is rose gradually by 21.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and key data points from the table, providing a general overview of temperature variations across the cities and months. However, there are some areas for improvement. The report could benefit from more specific comparisons and a clearer structure. For instance, you could group the cities and discuss their temperature changes month by month, or vice versa. Also, try to avoid vague language like "around 4" and provide the exact figures. The conclusion could be more concise and summarize the overall trends more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, making it harder to follow the comparisons and trends. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast,' 'similarly,' 'overall') to link ideas and improve the logical progression of the report. Paragraphing is acceptable but could be refined to group related information more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit generic (e.g., 'shown highest average temperatures,' 'too cold than in other cities'). Try to use more specific and descriptive language to convey the information more effectively. For example, instead of 'too cold,' you could say 'significantly lower.' Also, avoid informal language such as 'survey'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common issues include incorrect verb tense ('have shown,' 'have risen,' 'have grown'), incorrect preposition use, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there's limited use of more complex grammatical structures. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and carefully proofread for grammatical errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of prepositions.

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