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Band 7+: The line graph shows the percentage of people of different age groups and how they rate a set of factors in terms of importance when buying a new home.

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The image shows a line graph detailing percentages of people rating factors important when buying a new home across age groups 25-34, 35-44, 45-54, and 55-64: Schools at 50%, 25%, 20%, 18%; Crime Rate steady around 80% across all age groups; Shopping Facilities at 25%, 35%, 40%, 50%; Parks at 10%, 15%, 18%, 20%; Public Transport at 5%, 10%, 15%, 18%.

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The line graph illustrates the percentages of people’s ratings of four different age groups based on five essential factors when purchasing a new home.

Overall, the most drastic rise in a factor is the crime rate when buying a new home, while school showed less trending among older age groups. Whereas, other factors show decline and incline trends.

Crime rate shows the highest percentages of people of all age groups, almost around 76%. Whereas, the percentage of people rating school was higher between 52% to 51% in the initial age groups from 25 to 44. However, it shows a steady decline in the percentage among the older age group.

On the other hand, shopping, parks, and public transport show less importance than other factors, starting between 0 to 25 percent in the younger age groups. However, these gradually inclined at the end of the age group, approximately 20 to 30%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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groups: 5

factors: 3

other: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a good overview of the main trends in the graph. However, it could be improved by providing more specific details about the changes in each factor across the age groups.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. However, some sentences could be more concise and flow more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words could be used more precisely.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar and punctuation. There are very few minor errors.

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Band 7+: The line graph shows the percentage of people of different age groups and how they rate a set of factors in terms of importance when buying a new home.

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