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Band 5+: The line graph shows the percentage of people of different age groups and how they rate a set of factors in terms of importance when buying a new home. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates percentages of importance factors for new home buyers across age categories: Schools, 58% (25-34), 52% (35-44), 42% (45-54), 28% (55-64); Crime Rate, ranging from 65% to 75% across age groups, peaking at 76% (55-64); Shopping Facilities, consistent around 65% (25-34), diminished to roughly 61% (35-44), reached 63% (45-54), surged to 64% (55-64); Parks, initiated at approximately 49% (25-34), tapered off to 48% (35-44), plateauing around 47% (45-54), dipped to 47% (55-64); Public Transport, commenced at 52% (25-34), climbed to peaks near 54% (35-44), hit 57% (45-54), maintained minimal fluctuation at 62% (55-64).
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The above line graph depicts the percentage of people of different age groups, precisely 25-34, 35-44, 45-54, 55-64 take into account the factors in terms of importance when buying a new home. The date is given in terms of percentage.

As illustrated, the importance of public transport and parks which is at less than 10 percent is the least of concern for the age group 25 to 34 with an increase in demand upto 25 percentage as the age of the people is increasing. The importance of shopping facilities is the same for the age groups 25 to 44 at 15 percentage but sees a significant rise, upto 25 percentage after 44 to up until the age of 64.

One of the deciding factor, above 50 percentage, is the availability of schools for the age group 25 to 34 which sees a significant decline, to less than 25 percentage as we move across the different age groups. The factor that is of utmost significance which stands in the first place at more than 75 percentage is the crime rate

With this, we can conclude that each group has its own factors in terms of importance when buying a new home but the most common factor is the crime rate

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
percentage: 7
importance: 4
groups: 3
terms: 3
which: 3
group: 3
factor: 3
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Task Response

6
The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported. Some of the information is also irrelevant or inappropriately presented. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph and ensure that all key features are discussed with relevant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. Transitions between ideas could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, the connections between the different factors and age groups are not always clearly articulated. Paragraphing is present, but could be used more effectively to group related ideas together. Try to use a wider range of cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

6
The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are opportunities to use more precise and sophisticated language. Some phrases are a bit repetitive or could be expressed more concisely. For instance, varying the language used to describe changes and trends would enhance the lexical resource. Consider using synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to the topic of home buying factors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Sentence structures are relatively simple, and there is limited use of complex constructions. Accuracy in grammar and punctuation needs improvement. For example, check for subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper use of articles and prepositions. Expanding the range of grammatical structures would enhance the overall quality of the report.

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