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The image shows a line graph and a table detailing the number of overseas residents' annual visits to Australia. Line graph data: 1975: 10 million, 1985: 15 million, 1995: 25 million, 2005: 30 million. Table of visitors (million) 1975/2005: South Korea 2.9/9.1, Japan 3.2/12.0, China 0.3/0.8, USA 0.4/1.1, Britain 0.9/2.9, Europe 1.1/4.5, Total 8.8/30.4.

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The data illustrate the million of foreigners who visited Australia from 1975 to 2005, and the million of populations from six different regions visiting Australia in 1975 and 2005. Looking from an overall perspective, the most noticeable trend is uplift constantly. Where residents of Japan account for the highest number of visitor.

Turning first to the number of international tourists, the most striking feature is in 2005 nearly 32%. In the beginning of the period, the number of visitors stood at under 10%, and remained increasing rapidly. Visitant numbers in 1895 and 1995 rose around 7% and 9%, respectively.

Meanwhile, the number of visitors from 6 various districts displayed an escalated figure in all of them. Japan showed its superiority in increased rate with approximately 8.8% from 1975 to 2005, exceeding South Korea, which raised from 2.9% to 9.1%. Whereas, both Europe and Britain are reported a rising range of below 4%. The two other areas – The USA and China – constituted the smallest growth just under 0.7% and lower.

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