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Band 4+: The map below show the layout of a public library five years ago and the layout as it now

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The image presents two public library layouts: '5 years ago' and 'Current plan'. The '5 years ago' layout had an entrance on the left, leading to a space with a Classroom, Meeting room, and a Borrowing and returning desk on the left side. The center contained upper Book shelves, two Study tables, and lower Book shelves. The right side had Computer desks and a Library Office. The 'Current plan' shows the same entrance, with the left side now containing a Recording studio, Meeting room, a 'Borrowing books' area, and a 'Returning books' area. The center has been updated to include upper Book shelves, six Private study tables, and Student laptop desks. The right side now features Computer / laptop desks and a Conference room.

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The maps illustrate the layout of a public library 5 years ago and at the present time.

It can be noticeable that the public library has been through several modifications included a conference room, students laptop desks, private study tables and recording studio, changes of borrowing books and returning books. However, infrastructure like computer desks, book shelves and meeting rooms has been remain unchanged.

In 5 years ago, the computer desks was located at the northeast corner which has remained the same of the public library and a laptop desk is also added their. In southeast corner, the library office has replaced by a conference room. In centre of the library, books selves has untouched at the north. in the middle centre, study tables has been converted into private study tables and also connected two tables there. Besides, in the bottom, the books shelves has demolished to build a student laptop desks.

In the west side area for classroom has been transported into recording studio. meeting room area is kept unaffected. Nevertheless, the borrowing and returning desk was adjusted while these has separated by borrowing and returning books.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

library: 5

books: 5

tables: 4

public: 3

laptop: 3

desks: 3

study: 3

borrowing: 3

returning: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes between the two maps and provides an overview of the modifications. However, there are several inaccuracies in how the changes are described, and the grammatical errors occasionally hinder the clarity of the information. To improve, ensure that the relationship between old and new features is described more precisely and focus on improving subject-verb agreement and tense consistency (e.g., using the present perfect to describe changes that have occurred over time).

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'However', 'Besides', 'Nevertheless'), they are often used incorrectly or do not help the flow of the text. To improve, focus on using transition words more naturally and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, singular purpose. Work on grouping similar changes together more effectively to guide the reader through the comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and often inaccurate. There are several instances of word choice errors (e.g., 'demolished' is too strong for a desk, 'transported' is used incorrectly for a room change, and 'has been remain' is ungrammatical). You should aim to use more precise verbs for describing changes in maps, such as 'converted into', 'replaced by', 'relocated', or 'expanded'. Additionally, pay attention to spelling (e.g., 'selves' instead of 'shelves').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are consistent issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'computer desks was', 'books selves has'), tense consistency, and the use of passive voice (e.g., 'has been remain', 'has replaced by'). There are also errors in preposition use and sentence structure. I recommend studying the passive voice extensively, as it is essential for describing changes in maps, and practicing subject-verb agreement to ensure clarity.

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