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Band 4+: The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image depicts two plans: an existing layout and a future layout for an area intersected by North Avenue and Victoria Avenue. In the current layout, North Avenue (top) has a car park on either end and a cinema in the middle. Below, along Victoria Avenue (from left to right), there is an exhibition, council offices, town hall, shopping centre, and library. The future layout indicates a shifted design: along North Avenue, a cafe replaces one car park, a cinema remains in the center, and a hotel & restaurant replace the other car park. Along Victoria Avenue (from left to right), the arrangement is shifted to council offices, underground library, underground car park, town hall, exhibition, and shopping centre.

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The map illustrate the information about the current layout and proposed future plan of civic centre.

Analysing the map ,there are certain kinds of buildings location in various areas of centre , those will reamained at same places such as cinema in north avenue,shopping centre in east side,high street in right side and smith street in left side of town.Currently ,there are two car parking in city locate at north west corner and north east corner ,which will be replaced by cafe and hotel ,respectively.

Analysing the map further,at the time ,an exibition has noticed in west south side ,which will be covered by the council office soon.Apart from this,southern part council building will be converted into under underground library.Therefore, a town hall in south side will be modified with underground car parking facility.Current exibition will be realocated into south east corner by replacing the library.

overall,it can be clearly seen that , in upcoming few years civic centre will be modified with modern infrastructure and facilities such as entertainment,better accomdation,learing environment and underground parking.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes between the current and future layouts and provides an overview of the transformations. However, there are some inaccuracies in describing the spatial relationships and the specific movements of facilities (for example, the description of the 'high street' and 'smith street' which are not present in the visual description). To improve, ensure that all mentioned landmarks are clearly identifiable in the provided data and focus on more precise directional language to describe the relocation of buildings. The overview is a good feature, but the body paragraphs would benefit from more consistent accuracy regarding which specific buildings are being replaced or moved.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by poor punctuation and sentence structure. There is an over-reliance on repetitive transition phrases like 'Analysing the map'. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In terms of...', 'Regarding...', 'Moving to...') and ensure that sentences flow naturally into one another. Avoid starting every paragraph with the same formulaic phrase.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'reamained', 'exibition', 'realocated', 'accomdation', 'learing'). There is also some awkward phrasing, such as 'an exibition has noticed', which does not convey the intended meaning. Aim to use more precise academic verbs for map tasks, such as 'redeveloped', 'relocated', 'transformed', or 'repurposed', and ensure correct spelling to maintain professional quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and often impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The map illustrate'), article usage, and sentence construction. Punctuation is also inconsistent, with spaces appearing before commas and periods. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures and ensuring that complex sentences are punctuated correctly. Practice using different tenses accurately, especially when comparing the present state with future plans.

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