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Band 5+: The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image consists of two maps, on the left, "Village Park 10 years ago" and on the right "Village Park Now". Both maps have an entrance, tennis courts, children's play area, a car park, and a football pitch. The car park capacity increased from 20 cars to 50 cars. In the current map, a picnic area, boating lake, café, and toilets have been added. The pond and woods, present 10 years ago, are not visible in the current map. A cycle path surrounds the entire park in the present map.

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The two maps illustrate the village park, in the past and in the future, the transformations that happened during the ten years ago until now.

Overall, the park has undergone significant enhancemant, firstly the car park extended to included 50 car insted of 20 car, secondly the tennis courts became 4, However the children’s area splited to two area, children’s play area and children’s soft play area next to the tennis courts.

Key facilites included toilets close to the football pitch which is in the middle of the park, on the right courner there is a pretty small cafe, and near the cafe there is boating lake insted of pond, and in the left courner there is a huge picnic area.

In conclusion, the changes were remarkable. Furthermore, village park now surrounded by cycle path which is butter than inside the park. Final thing thr football pitch got bigger in the center of the park.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the changes is not always clear, and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on providing a more structured overview and ensuring all key changes are accurately described. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and clarity in sentence construction.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always logical or easy to follow. The introduction could be more concise and clearly state the purpose of the report. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences, making it difficult to understand the main point of each paragraph. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are weak, leading to a disjointed feel. For example, the shift from car park expansion to tennis court changes feels abrupt. The conclusion is very short and doesn't effectively summarize the key changes. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on using clear topic sentences, logical paragraphing, and effective transitions.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices. For example, 'enhancemant' is a misspelling of 'enhancement,' and the phrase 'butter than inside the park' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. There is a reliance on simple vocabulary, and the report would benefit from using more precise and varied language to describe the changes in the park. To improve lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to maps, facilities, and changes, and pay attention to using words accurately and appropriately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in punctuation and sentence structure. For example, 'the park has undergone significant enhancemant' contains a misspelling and awkward phrasing. The sentence 'Key facilites included toilets close to the football pitch which is in the middle of the park' is grammatically incorrect and difficult to understand. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and proofreading carefully for errors.

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