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Band 4+: The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image consists of two maps, on the left, "Village Park 10 years ago" and on the right "Village Park Now". Both maps have an entrance, tennis courts, children's play area, a car park, and a football pitch. The car park capacity increased from 20 cars to 50 cars. In the current map, a picnic area, boating lake, café, and toilets have been added. The pond and woods, present 10 years ago, are not visible in the current map. A cycle path surrounds the entire park in the present map.

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the maps illustrate the the village park befor and after ten years by adding main features on the village park.

overall, the village park 10 years ago it consists of two of tennis courts, childrens play area, football pitch in the middle and car park for 20 cars close to the entrance .

In terms of the develompent, the add more two of tennis courts, while they maintan the chilldrens paly area and they building childrens soft play area , Appreciable they constraction under the soft paly area for the childrens – the toilets . And then faurthermore in the corner they constract a small cafe next to the cafe the is a boating lake, Additionally at the opposite corner there is a pretty pig picnic area , and around the wohle park there is a cycle path which is great for who want to cycle safely.

in conclusion, there alot of changes happend during the 10 years.

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, describing the changes to the village park over ten years. However, the organization could be improved for clarity, and there are some issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on structuring the report more logically, perhaps by grouping changes thematically (e.g., additions, removals, expansions). Also, proofread carefully to correct grammatical errors and improve word choice.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the changes in the park over time. Consider grouping information by area or feature to improve coherence. For example, discuss all changes related to the children's play area in one place. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in addition,' 'in contrast') to link ideas and sentences more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There are inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'constraction' instead of 'construction,' 'pretty pig picnic area'). Expand your vocabulary related to park features and development. Use synonyms to avoid repetition (e.g., instead of repeatedly using 'add,' try 'introduce,' 'construct,' 'develop').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect article usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. For example, 'the village park befor and after ten years' should be 'the village park before and after ten years,' and 'they maintan the chilldrens paly area' should be 'they maintained the children's play area.'

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