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Band 5+: The maps below compare the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800, 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays three diagrams for the years 1800, 1900, and 2000. In 1800, the areas include Farmland (crops), Woodland, River Stour, Brindell, and farmland (animals). By 1900, the areas adjust to include Farmland (crops), Woodland, River Stour, Brindell, Bun Hill, Industry, and Village for workers. By 2000, the areas remain Farmland (crops), Woodland, River Stour, Brindell, Industry, and Village for workers, with the addition of Bun Hill Park near Bun Hill, portraying shifts in land use and settlement expansion over time.

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The given maps shows the Bridden town and its changes from 1800 to 1900 and 2000. The diagram consists of three maps that is very similar but has some differences.

Overall, the most significant change was in 2000 years. Some coastal areas remained almost untouched.

On the one hand, Farmlands and Woodland remained unchanged from 1800 to 1900 years but for 2000s near Woodland was added Bun Hill park across the River Stour. By adding Bun Hill park made River side smaller. As for the Brindell that was also the same in 1800 and 1900 years . However in 2000s the Brindell coastline became extremely large.

On the other hand, in 1800 years there was a farmland that was particularly for animals, but in 1900 years people built a Bun Hill which is village for workers and added industrial facilities to that side, where its coastal area remained unchanged. Next 2000 years saw inlarging the Bun Hill as well as the industrial sector rose grammatically.

In conclusion, the most important changes were in 2000 years and some parts of the town remained unchanged but with the slight improvements.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

years: 7

remained: 4

unchanged: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some changes in Brindell over the three time periods, but it lacks specific details and accurate comparisons. The organization is present, but the description of changes is general and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, focus on providing more precise details about the transformations in each area and ensure accuracy in describing the changes. Also, enhance the comparative analysis by highlighting specific differences between the periods.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information chronologically, but the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between ideas. The introduction and conclusion are basic and lack depth. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to better group related information. To improve coherence, use more varied cohesive devices and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively simple and lacks the precision needed to effectively describe the changes shown in the maps. There is some repetition of words and phrases. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to urban development, land use, and geographical features. Use synonyms and more descriptive language to avoid repetition and provide a more detailed account of the transformations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors impact the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly and proofread carefully to identify and correct errors in grammar and punctuation.

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