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Band 5+: The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two sketches of a beach area, labeled as "1950" and "Now." In the first sketch, from the left, a city is connected to a car park with a play area and dining tables next to it, further right is a pavilion between two 25m pools facing the beach, and a lighthouse is situated on the far right. The second sketch, labeled "Now," shows a city connected to a car park with dining tables next to it, to the right is a pavilion, followed by a 50m pool above the beach with a restaurant and surf club next to it, and a lighthouse on the far right. The road in the second sketch curves around the pool, beach, and lighthouse.

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The picture gives information about the changes that took place in the beachfront area in Australia from 1950 to at present year. Overall, it can be seen that there is a great development and improvement in facilities across the beach and also at the front side of the area.

To commence with, the road in the front of the beach is very short in the year 1950, but today the road is extended towards the beach, and the car park connected with the road is also enlarged now than it was before. Playground across the road in 1950 is replaced with small car park, and it merges with the road directly that moves towards city.

Furthermore, at the present restaurant is newly develop on the left side of the beach and at one side the pool distance is increased to 50 meters at present then it was before 25 meters in the year 1950, and at another side both pool sizes are same. Two new surf club facilities are added on both sides of the beach, which was not there in the past.

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The response provides a good overview of the changes in the beachfront area from 1950 to the present. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report, such as not mentioning the pavilion, the lighthouse, and the road layout in the second sketch.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and linking ideas more effectively. Some sentences are unclear and could be better structured for improved coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and repetitions are present. More precise and varied word choices could enhance the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the report. More attention to grammar accuracy and sentence structures is needed for a higher score.

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