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Band 4+: The maps below show a coal mining site before and after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates two maps; first labeled "Before" with office, staff changing room, parking area, director board, car parking, entrance underground (for workers), waste tip 1, and waste tip 2; second labeled "After" with museum, parking area, cafe, entrance underground (for visitors), digging driving track, picnic area, children play area, and lottery park.

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The given maps provide information about the changes that happened in a cool mining site of workers and visitors redevelopment.

Overall, it can be seen that the cool mining site underwent some extensive development, with notable expansions in communal, commercial, and recreational facilities.

In the beginning, the left side of the map mine workers have been occupied both office and dress changing room, which replaced by a large museum. And then, the entrance of underground area remained stable but later which is including for the visitors for tourist attractions. After that, the medical room has constructed by a cafeteria in the center of the map.

In addition to this, the right hand corner of the map both waste tip have removed by including a digger driving truck, a picnic area, and a kids play area. The bottom-right corner of the map the lorry park has replaced, with a souvenir shop and besides a new footpath. Despite these changes, the car park of the left hand part remain unchanged.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the changes between the two maps. However, there are significant issues with clarity and accuracy that hinder the overall response. Some descriptions are confusing (e.g., 'medical room' was not mentioned in the visual description, and 'cool' is used instead of 'coal'), and the grammatical structures often obscure the intended meaning. To improve, focus on using clearer comparative language (e.g., 'was replaced by', 'was transformed into') and ensure that the features mentioned are directly supported by the provided data. Aim for better cohesion between sentences to create a smoother flow of information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is frequently interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'In addition to this', 'Despite these changes'), they do not always function effectively because the sentences themselves are difficult to follow. To improve, focus on using clearer transition signals and ensuring that each sentence flows logically into the next without losing the reader in complex, broken structures.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use vocabulary related to the task (e.g., 'redevelopment', 'recreational facilities'), but there are significant errors in word choice and spelling. For example, 'cool mining site' is used instead of 'coal mining site', and 'medical room' appears to be a misinterpretation of the visual data. Additionally, some word combinations are unnatural. Aim to build a more precise vocabulary for describing changes, such as 'transformed into', 'converted from', or 'made way for', and ensure spelling accuracy to avoid changing the meaning of your sentences.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede communication. There are issues with tense consistency (mixing present and past), subject-verb agreement, and passive voice construction (e.g., 'the medical room has constructed by a cafeteria' is grammatically incorrect). Sentence structures are often fragmented or run-on. To improve, practice using the passive voice correctly to describe changes (e.g., 'The office was replaced by a museum') and focus on mastering basic sentence structures before attempting more complex ones.

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