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Band 5+: The maps below show Harrison 's Stables in 1920 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two maps of Harrison's Stables. In the year 1920, the site, located next to a Road, featured a Main House, two Cottages, a Barn, a Riding Path, a large Field with a Fence, and Stables. By the year 2010, the site, now bordered by a Road and a Train Line, comprised a Car Park, an Office Block, Stables, a smaller Riding Path, and a Fence.

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The two maps illustrate changes in Harrison’s Stables. The diagram focuses on the changes between 1990 and 2010.

Overall, the park developed considerably and became far more built-up throughout this period. Moreover, it saw some changes and its infrastructure together with introduction new buildings to households.

In the initial year, the main house, cottages and Barn located on top of the map side by side. The riding path separate two sides of the map. In the near of the road large stables building is located. Moreover, the left side of the stables stayed only fence beside the field.

In the next year, main house changed to car park beside the new train line on top of the map. On the bottom of the car park stables stayed as before. Here, it was enlarged by two folds. The barn area enlarged and changed into Office book. The riding path curved to bottom of the map, in the near of the downsized fence which located in the left side of the map.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

stables: 4

changes: 3

located: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the changes to Harrison's Stables between 1920 and 2010, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks clarity. The organization is somewhat unclear, and the language contains errors that impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately describing the key changes, organizing the information logically, and using precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the paragraphing and flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction is weak and contains inaccuracies (incorrect years). Transitions between sentences and ideas are often abrupt, making it difficult for the reader to follow the changes described. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of specific vocabulary related to map descriptions or changes over time. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the transformations and features of the stables more precisely. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'changed,' try 'transformed,' 'converted,' or 'redeveloped.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect preposition usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. While the meaning is generally understandable, the high frequency of errors detracts from the overall quality of the report. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction to enhance clarity and accuracy.

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