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Band 6+: The maps below show the Riverside Park in 2010 and now.

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The image shows two diagrams of Riverside Park. In 2010, features included a river at the top, vegetation area bottom left, a railway track along the top, and a walking path curving inside. Four circular paths are aligned centrally. One station on the railway line is visible. Presently, additions include a hotel on the upper-left, a parking area towards the center, two toilets centrally located, a cafe situated top-center, six swing sets beside the cafe, and additional road, cycle path, and walking paths. The railway station remains unchanged.

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The maps illustrate the change in area both in 2010 and nowadays.

Overall, the area underwent several significant changes with new facilities, which added on some of the original area. Nevertheless, certain areas were remained stable.

Before the development of the riverside park, there were three toilets and three parking areas in the center, which were surrounded by walking path. The heritage railway consists of the stations and railway track. The southern part of the river had the vegetation.

After the certain facilities was built, there are the cycle path along the river. In the middle of the areas, toilets are minimised. The swings are built between the toilets. The park is constructed in the north of the road, while the hotel is located in the east of the road. The northern part of the new park have the cafe. With regard to the vegetation and the heritage railway, it remained unchanged.

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the 2010 map is inaccurate, mentioning three toilets and three parking areas when none existed at that time. The description of the current map also has inaccuracies, such as the location of the hotel being east of the road when it's actually on the upper left. To improve, focus on accurately describing the key features and changes shown in the maps, and ensure the information is precise and relevant.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The overview is present but could be more impactful by directly highlighting the key changes. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences, making it harder to follow the specific changes being described. Consider using more precise transitional phrases to guide the reader through the comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit generic (e.g., 'certain facilities,' 'significant changes'). Try to use more specific vocabulary related to park features and development (e.g., 'amenities,' 'redeveloped,' 'expanded').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'there were three toilets' should be revised based on the map's details. 'Facilities was built' needs correction. Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will enhance accuracy.

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