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Band 5+: The maps below show the Riverside Park in 2010 and now.

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The image shows two diagrams of Riverside Park. In 2010, features included a river at the top, vegetation area bottom left, a railway track along the top, and a walking path curving inside. Four circular paths are aligned centrally. One station on the railway line is visible. Presently, additions include a hotel on the upper-left, a parking area towards the center, two toilets centrally located, a cafe situated top-center, six swing sets beside the cafe, and additional road, cycle path, and walking paths. The railway station remains unchanged.

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The maps compare the previous condition of Riverside Park and how it looks at present. Overall, the place has undergone significant alterations mainly by increasing the amount of public facilities and changing the road layout.

Looking at the details, in 2010, in the Riverside Park had a simple view and there were very few facilities. At the corner of the park were a lot of trees and it was green place. To west side of it, three parking places were situated. Similarly, there were three toilets. The park was surrounded by road, which was connected to the Heritage Railway.

However, after some years, the town has experienced noticeable changes. Near to the Heritage Railways, hotel is built and the number of parking spaces increased. Three swings are constructed between two toilets. For people walking path is built, so they can enjoy from the view of the park. Walking path is located near to the river.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing both the 2010 map and the current state of the park. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency. Some information provided in the report contradicts the visual description (for example, the report mentions three parking places and three toilets in 2010, whereas the description suggests these are new additions). Additionally, the description of the changes is somewhat repetitive and lacks a clear overview of the most significant developments. To improve, ensure that you clearly distinguish between what existed in the past and what has been added recently, and focus on grouping features logically to show the transformation more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In addition to this,' 'Regarding the infrastructure,' 'In contrast to the 2010 layout') to link sentences more smoothly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic that flows naturally into the next.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but quite basic and repetitive (e.g., 'built', 'place', 'view'). There is an attempt to use some descriptive language, but it lacks the sophistication required for higher bands. To improve, try to use more precise synonyms for changes, such as 'modernized,' 'expanded,' 'redeveloped,' or 'transformed.' Instead of saying 'it was green place,' you could use 'the area was characterized by dense vegetation.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with article usage (e.g., 'hotel is built' instead of 'a hotel has been built'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure (e.g., 'in the Riverside Park had a simple view'). There is also a lack of variety in sentence structures, with many simple sentences. To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures, particularly the use of the present perfect passive (e.g., 'has been constructed') to describe changes that have occurred over time.

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