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Band 6+: The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 andin 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two maps of a village named Stokeford for the years 1930 and 2010, both featuring the River Stoke to the west and a bridge to the northeast. In 1930, the settlement consisted of 18 houses located along a single main road, a Post office, 2 shops, and a Primary school. To the southeast was a large house set in gardens with 3 trees, and the surrounding area was designated as Farmland, featuring 6 cow icons. By 2010, the road network had expanded with new streets. The settlement now comprised 33 houses, a Post office, and an extended Primary school building. The large house, gardens, and shops are no longer present; in place of the house is a Retirement home with 2 trees. The farmland is also absent from the 2010 map.

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The maps illustrate the comparison of Stokeford village from 1930 to 2010.

Overall, there are some changes in this area, which has undergone significant development by

transforming from relatively farmlands into more houses. While some building features have been changed as well.

In 1930, it can be seen that the farmlands were located near River Stoke and north east of the primary school. Moreover, on the western side of the primary school, there are several small buildings, such as houses, shops, and post office. Additionally, on the opposite side of the road, there is a large house which contain gardens nearby primary school.

There were some infrastructure changes in 2010, the farmlands and the shops were transformed into numerous houses. Furthermore, the large house with gardens turned into retirement home and the main road is connected with it. While, the primary school was extended, and the farmland in its northern part had removed and changed into houses.

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houses: 4

primary: 4

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farmlands: 3

school: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, identifying key changes in Stokeford between 1930 and 2010. The description of the main features and the comparisons are generally clear. To improve, consider structuring the report more thematically, grouping similar changes together (e.g., changes in housing, changes in amenities). Also, ensure that all significant details are mentioned, and the language is precise and varied.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a reasonable overview and identifies some key changes. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping changes thematically (e.g., residential expansion, changes to amenities) to enhance coherence. The use of cohesive devices is adequate but could be more varied to avoid repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate but lacks sophistication. There's reliance on simple words like 'changes' and 'transformed.' Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to describe the transformations more precisely. For example, instead of 'transformed into,' consider using words like 'converted,' 'redeveloped,' or 'replaced by.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structures are relatively simple, and there are issues with article usage ('the farmlands were located near River Stoke') and verb tense consistency. Aim for more complex sentence structures and ensure accurate use of articles and tenses to improve grammatical accuracy.

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