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Band 7+: The maps compare a present layout of the college and future developments to it

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The image displays two diagrams, a "PRESENT LAYOUT" and a "FUTURE LAYOUT". The "PRESENT LAYOUT" contains 1 administrative offices building, 1 car park, 1 sports fields area, 1 entrance, a central building with 10 teaching areas arranged in two columns of 5 separated by 1 corridor, 1 staff room, and 5 trees. The "FUTURE LAYOUT" contains 1 administrative offices building, 1 cafe, 1 library, 1 sports fields area, 1 sports hall, 2 entrances, the same central building with 10 teaching areas and 1 corridor, 1 staff room, and a new building with 3 labs (Lab 1, Lab 2, Lab 3) and 1 computer room separated by a second corridor.

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The images show a present placement of the college and developments, which are planned in the future.

Overall, the place will undergo significant improvements in educational facilities. Of particular note, a cafe, a library, a sports hall, laboratories, a computer room, and more teaching areas will be introduced.

Nowadays, there are fewer educational facilities. Starting with the left side of the map, administrative offices are located near to the car park, whereas sports fields occupy a large area in the corner. Space for teaching is situated it the center divided be the corridor, which leads to the staff room at the bottom of the picture. On the right side, woodland is seen.

By the future, there will have been some significant changes. While the car park will be converted into a cafe and a library, sports fields will be divided into two parts, on the second of which new sports hall will be sited. Teaching area will be noticably extended, and trees will be replaced by laboratories and a computer room.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the present and future layouts of the college. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs for each time period. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data, such as the mention of 'more teaching areas' when the number remains the same, and the description of the car park being converted into a cafe and library, which is not entirely accurate based on the visual description. Additionally, the report could benefit from more precise language and better organization of information. To improve, focus on accurately representing the changes and ensuring that all key features are mentioned without misinterpretation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs for present and future layouts. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between sentences. For example, the transition from the present to the future layout could be smoother. Additionally, some sentences are a bit abrupt, and the paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'present placement' for 'present layout', 'significant improvements'). However, there are some inaccuracies and less natural choices, such as 'present placement' (should be 'present layout'), 'noticably' (spelling error), and 'woodland' (should be 'trees'). The range of vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and sophisticated to achieve a higher score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include 'situated it the center divided be the corridor' (should be 'situated in the center, divided by a corridor'), 'By the future, there will have been some significant changes' (awkward tense usage), and 'on the second of which new sports hall will be sited' (missing article and preposition). Punctuation is generally correct, but the errors in grammar and sentence construction prevent the report from achieving a higher score.

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