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Band 5+: The maps describe the current layout of a school as well as some proposals to its structure for a future year, 2025.

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The image displays two bird's eye view diagrams labeled "School now" and "School in 2025". The "School now" diagram features a labeled school building, playground, and canteen, all surrounded by parking for 30 spaces. The "School in 2025" diagram also includes a school building, playground, and canteen, but the parking is reduced to 15 spaces, and a labeled 'Bicycle racks' area is added, along with 12 trees around the parking's perimeter. Both diagrams have a directional compass with north pointing downwards.

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The maps illustrate the developments between 2025 and nowadays.

Overall, it is clear that the school underwent a significant makeover over the period in question, as a result becoming more different. Furthermore, at present it has only a few roads, but in the past it had more roads. Moreover, the location of facilities between now and 2025 changed. Despite all of these changes, some of the original features of the school remain unaltered.

Focusing on roads, in the north there was a way to a parking area with 150 spaces, a canteen, and staff parking with 20 spaces in 2025; currently, the canteen has been removed and the road only for parking 200 spaces. In addition, in the south there was also a parking area with 20 spaces that was removed in the present day.

Secondly, in 2025 there were two basketball and tennis courts on the west side of the playground; currently, one of the basketball courts has been removed and those facilities have been relocated to the east side of the school building.

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parking: 4

spaces: 4

school: 3

roads: 3

there: 3

removed: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant details, particularly regarding the number of parking spaces and the presence of roads. The description of changes is also unclear and difficult to follow. To improve, focus on accurately representing the information provided in the diagrams, avoid introducing details not present in the visuals, and organize the report in a more coherent manner, clearly distinguishing between the 'now' and '2025' layouts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the structure could be improved for clarity. The introduction and overview are present but lack precision. The body paragraphs show some logical sequencing, but transitions between ideas could be smoother. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, instead of simply stating 'Furthermore' or 'Moreover,' try using phrases that explicitly connect the ideas being presented.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the changes, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and sophistication. Some word choices are not entirely accurate or natural (e.g., 'makeover,' 'more different,' 'roads' instead of 'parking spaces'). Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to map features and changes. For example, instead of 'removed,' consider using 'replaced,' 'relocated,' or 'eliminated' depending on the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors and phrasing issues are noticeable and impact clarity. There are errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'The maps illustrate the developments between 2025 and nowadays' should be revised for accuracy and clarity. Pay closer attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to improve the overall quality of the report.

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