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Band 5+: The maps show a beachfront in Australia in 1950 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two maps comparing the layout of a beach area in 1950 and now. In 1950, the area includes a road leading from the city, a playground, a pavilion, a car park, dining tables, a lighthouse, a 50m pool, a 25m pool, and a beach. The modern map has changes with two car parks, the addition of a restaurant and a surf club, and the same lighthouse, 50m pool, 25m pool, and beach. The playground is removed in the modern version. Roads leading to and within the area appear more developed in the current map.

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The two maps illustrate the significant changes that have taken in the area of beachfront between the year 1950and present day.

Overall, the breachfront has been extensively redevloped. Lighthouse has been connected with the main roads and some new buildings were constructed such as resturant, stuf club.A new car park also added and it was linked with the main road.

In 1950, The was a single car park area which was linked with main road. There was a playground but now it is converted into another cark park area. A few buildings remains unchanged such as dining table and pawton. There were two swiming pool which also remain It’s orjinal.

In present time, A new reaturant is made near northern east side of the beach. And two stuff club also constructed : one is left side of the lighthouse and another is Right side of the resturant. The Lighthouse is being linked with the main road

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the 1950 map is somewhat limited, and the report contains some irrelevant or inaccurate information. For example, the pavilion is removed in the modern map, and the dining tables are also removed. To improve, focus on accurately representing the key changes and continuities between the two maps, and ensure that all information presented is relevant and accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. Paragraphing could be improved to better group related information. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the flow of the report. For example, the connection between the overall statement and the subsequent details could be smoother. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of misspelling ('breachfront', 'resturant', 'stuf club', 'pawton', 'orjinal') which detract from the clarity of the report. To improve, focus on using more specific and varied vocabulary related to urban development and spatial changes. For example, instead of 'new buildings were constructed,' try 'new facilities were erected.' Proofread carefully to eliminate spelling errors. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often simple and repetitive. For example, 'The two maps illustrate the significant changes that have taken in the area of beachfront between the year 1950and present day' contains tense and preposition errors. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and carefully proofread for errors. Pay attention to verb tenses, article usage, and sentence construction.

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